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Old 12-05-04, 05:55 PM   #1
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Exclamation a must read...for hardcore rap fans!!!

IP: 7696 4EB2

***i believe that i stepped my game up on this one, gimmie some honest feedback 4real!***

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i use mechetes cuz they there 4 me
and if i wasnt myself
i'd hire ME to go and kill 4 me
cuz its like dat
blow a nigga head back futher than beartraps
right where yo momma stay at
BITCH CAN YOU HEAR DAT?
i dont think, i'll kill you and wont blink
and if you at tha bar trippin, i'll drown you in yo own drink
i suffercated my shrink just for talkin
went to his funeral, fucked up his paul bearers and made them drop his coffin
dis is killa music, niggas and bitches know whats happenin
i'll shoot you, come back in a week, and shoot you again
im supa-m-a-n, and im not yo fuckin friend
i'll smoke infront of tha police, come back and smoke again
im crazy, havin sex wit 80 year old ladies
fuckin da shit out of yo grandma, and in 9 months maybe
you'll have another uncle dat you older than
dis sick shit dont stop, bitch im at it again
get off my dick...

and thats it for right now, get @ tha kid
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Old 12-05-04, 08:11 PM   #2
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dont nobody seem to like my shit. can somebody that has read some of my work tell me why? please ppl, i need tha comments. 4real
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Old 12-05-04, 08:18 PM   #3
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lol dayum nigga i thought you said hardcore as in rap
not old azz stank azz 90 yrs olds why you gotta jump on mah
grannie like dat lol nigaa dats hella funny i wanna hear sum mo nigga keep flowin
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Old 12-05-04, 08:37 PM   #4
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im gone put some more up soon. thanx for dat feedback kid. can i get someone else?
anyone?
anyone?
lol
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Old 12-05-04, 08:40 PM   #5
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its wack........ thats why there was no replys....
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Old 12-05-04, 10:24 PM   #6
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um...i would say u got potential...but i cant tell if u do or not...ne way...

i might as well say UPPIN...cause there aint no other excuse for this freepost...
...LMFAO...
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Old 12-06-04, 04:06 AM   #7
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as of right now ur wack but keep workin every dope emcee was wack at one point ur gonan get alot of hate just use it as motivation to get better
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Old 12-06-04, 09:18 AM   #8
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lmao.......
sex with old ladies.....weird.
i haven't read any of ur other drops but from this one i can see that ur #1 a certified looney and u just need ta find ur angle.i think u'd be a dope emcee if u attacked the mic the right way.u have to find out wat way that is.^^^that up there wasn't it tho'.
keep elevating and drop some more funny stuff,i enjoyed the laugh.
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