Rainfall

It starts pourin' rain...but this isn't the first...
an image takin' shape...this is life at it's worst
Thoughts rift, eyes shift...mind drifts to unstable...
catch myself starrin' at my dusty turntables...
"When will it stop rainin'?...I urned for the sun-
to come...imaginin' fields where I could run...
rememberin' the hikes...the times I climbled trees...
fallin' off my bike...big cuts on my knees...
these were the scenes that I breathed...
the reasons I lived...
stories I'd give, when I had kids...
my pain from the rain...others never understood...
life bein' slain...from my short childhood
I started to imagine things I could be missin'...
The finer parts of nature, i'd never get to listen
The eyes of my life...would they ever glisten?
my soul now compared to a Vinyl record...
"Drip"....the rain on the window pane...
not original but plain...all drops sounds the same
they came...they left...neither bringin' any new...
mark lasts for a bit...but then it goes through...
this is all I can do...only sit and observe...
but everynight I dream of "what if it curved.."
no blinds, or curtains...it's always in sight...
cuz if I blocked the rain...i'd be blockin' my life...
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Raindrop's stall as these opportunities call..
Hate dissolves as this society falls..
Symbollical flaws are dispursed with fleets of rain..
Pain calls the rainfall to stop, pursue its self and contain..
Re-Construction of the art in a philosophical being..
De-Corruption is to start without all deceasing..
Raindrops hit the pavement, shrouded in silence..
Muted as Evaporation barriers violence..
So time is, of the essence as blind minds retract..
So find this, teaching lesson as these signs react..
Hidden reasons in scriptures of raindrops falling from truth..
Expressing seasons of emotional conquests calling our youth..
Will the raindrops reform together? Or will it slowly die?..
Cowards disgrace all bretheren as the feelings collide..
Lives are stolen from family as the rain begins to tame..
But fear not, for the sun will appear without shame..
Clouds will clear, raindrops will gather and return to thier skies..
A golden age throughout.. no regrets or demise..


The water blurs words that are scripted on paper..
but I pray for the day when it might turn to vapour..
as the rainfall pours...it captures my thoughts..
when will the sun come?...and shine on hip-hop..

U elevated dramaticly when i left rb

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weerd it was good i know who you are you should up ya vocab though..but then again i use alot of vocab in my shit soo 8.2/10 nice drop...

Nice, was feeling the imagery.. focus was there and it keeps the readers attention, not once did i want skip to the last line.. was a very nice piece.. and nice flow to it, i'd say 8.7/10.................... keep droppin' your stuff...

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Thx for feed. Sup introspect.

O Dayum...........nice Shit Good Flow....nice Creativity............nice Imaginary.........9/10 Work On That Vocab Though............nice Emotions Too Chea


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good drop....(wuz this 4 school or sum shit.....lol)
i never heard sum1 rap about tha rain before...........but that's a good thing
mad props for tha creativity and being able to stay on topic and not digress through out the verses..............
..................nice mellow drop.............
9/10

If anyone wants to know. It's not about the rain. If you couldn't catch onto the symbollogy (i doubt anyone could)

The rain represents hiphop. Notice the last line...


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aw i must have skipped the last line or sum shit....but STILL

mad props