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Old 12-01-04, 05:31 PM   #1
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Feel the effects of my presence, when I step into the room, I’m the judge and the jury I’m your life conclusion
I’ll give u paper cutts so u know how brutal my writings are, like publix I’ll cut ur categories up in different section(s)
People say my rhymes are an myth, not the truth, but what I write, I see, and the effects of that I’ll get ya grill cooking
People needs to learn to stop saying my name in an negative, completive way, before I put on my scary mask u’ll be appalling
Every person I’d battled. I’d end there career. they know when its ova when the death knell has rung. Ur dreams have been took G
I give my remorse to them. But u was in the wrong place at the wrong time, u was in my way I had to take u down. Leaving no witness G
Why did the devil chose me to take souls. Why did the devils chose me to give u blow’s. its official the devil chose me to sealed ya fate
Doves wings have fallin. So as god. Black doves soaring through the sky. Now the devil has arrived . Chapter 1 heaven has been force to close the GATE~!



just an lil somthing chea
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


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Old 12-01-04, 05:40 PM   #2
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meh, 6.5/10................................................ ...
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Old 12-01-04, 05:42 PM   #3
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o aiiiight it was somthing off my head just now i gots to maintain.........chea
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 12-01-04, 05:50 PM   #4
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nice drop man, - 7/10 ...................chek da structure, lyrics tight, ideas were aight aswell man.................was feelin da line:

Why did the devil chose me to take souls. Why did the devils chose me to give u blow’s. its official the devil chose me to sealed ya fate
Doves wings have fallin. So as god. Black doves soaring through the sky. Now the devil has arrived . Chapter 1 heaven has been force to close the GATE~!

shit was petic....needed 2 b in a poetry peace man, was nice imagery wit da doves n good theme n vocab

nice drop 3 sumin off top of yo head fam

chek ma battle wit terse or topival wit flow intelligent and retrn tha favour wit an honet vote
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Old 12-01-04, 05:57 PM   #5
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O Yea I Forgot About That Topical Battle......chea Iam Gonna Go To Put An Vote Chea
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 12-01-04, 07:12 PM   #6
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uppin for feeds bitches nuff said...............uppin
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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