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12-03-04, 05:38 PM
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Thug Passion...Poet and Open Mic
IP: D135 D6AF
Baby girl allready know wha she Bout ..Kno where and when her Man Be
Kno 2 come in the Crib allready Decked out in the Vicki T shirt and Panties Its more pleasure if it comes out Perfectly from the Heart Love cant Last if you Never give it a Single Chance 2 Start Now i kno wha pac was talkin bout when he said Relocateing 2 a Thug Mansion Watchin Sunsets.. that Best Sex thats Unforget smokein and Sippin Thug Passion Where Eva baby doll wanna Relocate..She kno ima Be ready 2 Co Sign my Time She support me thru all My issues...Shit i love u Beyond ya status of bein a Dime Baby dont let tha Status of our age come inbetween our Emotinal Settings Unbelievable Pleasure when we together...Cant wait until the Promotinal Wedding She understands tha Grind..baby manage 4 Kids...My Time..Ironing and Stayin Fine She allready knew wha 2 Exspect from the Jumpoff.When i gave her my 1st Line Thats why where ever i decide 2 Relocate 2 my Boo gone be Thru it wit Me Shit its Obvious this Love Uncontested Like the Old Bobby and Whitney K-I-SS Me is wha she Pleads the Moment i step out tha S-U-V Let it be Known we Freaks...But Me's dont Associate wit S-T-D's U held me down thru every damn Near thang i was Going Thru Cuz i kno this is Undeniable that we gone be Here when time is Thru U kno im from the Street...so its a Prospect 4 me 2 keep it Gully Not only is she a lover..Mother..friend...she even hold me like a Buddie Shortie a Nymphomanic so Exspectedly we Exchange thru 4 Beds But i end it off every Night..under the Shower Kissin Drops off her 4 head
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12-03-04, 05:44 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
this the most romantic piece of work i have seen............ big ups.. the imagery was nice, the "kissing drops of her forehead" was very nice too... u better tell that girl. She'll prolly fall out when she hear this... good luck with y'alls relationship and all.. and keep droppin ya works.. fuck the haterz, leave 'em in the dirt..
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12-03-04, 05:45 PM
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IP: 9894 AD38
Structure- Very Basic But Delivered Ya Message Sweet. Kept Me Wanting To Read Cos It Was Easy To Follow and Visualize What Ya Trying To Say.8/10 Vocab-Good Vocab Kept It Domestic Which Is Cool, Some Word's I Had To Look Up! lol, 7/10. Overall-This Was a Dope Piece Of Poetry/OM Entry, I See It As a Little Bit Of a Tribute To Pac's Meaning's In His Lyriz, Which I ain't Seen Before, Delivered In Someone Else's Message. Nice Originality. 8.5/10.
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12-03-04, 06:01 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 3240 794D
Wow...beautiful dawg...Romantic, loving, sweet, and all that gay shit...lmao...j/p...straight drop man...8.5/10...1
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12-04-04, 03:40 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
4sho i was tryin some diff shit here..happy ya feelin it
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12-04-04, 03:45 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
upppin...............
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