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Old 12-08-04, 03:25 PM   #1
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here's a lil peice i just finished up, its a krazy ass beat that i wanted to lace up, it does bars by 8, then chorus, then 8, then chorus, then there are 2 more spots for 8 bars open, whoever wants to fill 'em in get at me for the full beat fotwenty@aol.com let me know if you lace this shitz, i can picture a sevend third or enygma type style on this. but whatevers clever. peep it up n leave links in feed. pz

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Old 12-08-04, 03:43 PM   #2
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i like da beat, can "reloaded" use it? holla at me AIM = and1rightherr
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Old 12-08-04, 04:27 PM   #3
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Is kinda boring beat....and how u get at it..needs more energy....

I havent felt the presence...seriously

Lyrics were Dirty Souf kinda shit..it was cool..

Overall aite..track
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Old 12-08-04, 06:15 PM   #4
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man this is dope....i like it...reminds me of a lil jon beat...i thaught their was enough energy,...but anyway..its my opinion...keep dropping its dope
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Old 12-08-04, 08:57 PM   #5
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Hmm...it's an a'ight track. Need to work on a lil bit of things...like the quality of the voice. Anyway, peep my shit. Thanks.
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Old 12-08-04, 09:12 PM   #6
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for real, my honest oppinion, hook sucks balls, ima re do it, verses are sick lyrically, not sayin n e thing big, just a multi frenzy, flow is aright. but f'real yall, jus wait till christmas when i get my new mic, im jus fuckin around till then, i appreaciate tha feed back tho. energys straight tho. i'm deliverin' how i wanna so thats all i realy care about ya feel me? till i get my new equipment its just gonna be some pootie quality tho. beat is not boring tho, theres alot goin on in it.
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