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Old 12-04-04, 09:43 PM   #1
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From: Detroit, MI (tha Murda Mitten)
Cool aint nobody come to my other one so...

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i cant take time wit my ryhmes
writin silly shit daily
and one day im gone offend somebody and get spayed G
and since im lazy im edgy
stayin at tha edge of my bed speakin in patterns dat aint okay wit dem
muthafuckin niggaz dat can really pull some triggas
and me bein tha bigga nigga i get hit quicker
than tha average nigga dat got speed and he got rings on
so before he get shot he'll hit a nigga until his teeth gone
shit i can really go on and on
over no damn beat
just me and me
gigglin like HE-HE-HE
but thats so G-A-E
or G-A-Y
fuck it im high
i should be somewhere starin at tha sky
like im a muthafuckin drag
dis tha life i dont want to have
smokin so fast
a nigga get muthafuckin jet lag
but until i meet again wit a better hook
i'll keep on recordin my thoughts in this computerized book
guess im really in tha zone now
and i cant stop till im done
till i know i fuckin won like Bush's son
that was politically ill-mattered but fuck it
im tha coldest flowee since Eminem on his drug trip
***its probably not hot but i want feedback on this one PLEASE!!!***
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