I was told i could never make it, nor ever achieve it...
also told i was a mistake, but ill never believe it...
our lives are slot machines, we take chances and roll...
well thats what it seems, we take a glance and we throw...
away our lives as we try to maintain an enjoyable week...
but our lifes a creek over time we seem to grow more deep...
dont live your life like it was your last, live it slow not fast...
like a car speedin,whats around the corner?, you dont kno...Crash...
there goes a perfect life, waisted like it was garbage from last night...
you kno exactly why, drugs enhance the life like a bright ass light...
little man go to school, get a good education...
life is constipation, you dont what your facein...
make doh and dont throw your life over the next slutty hoe...
for all you know she could be Aids infested with a bloody nose...
If you choose not to listen to this strong advice...
ill accept it, cuz your the one controlin your life...

Nice man... this was real... I was feelin' it... and this is pretty good... I don't usually say this but this is one of the better open mics so far this month...

8.5/10

~VP~

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thanks man, uppin for more feedback

ah yeah return the favor... leave feedback on my open mic, Graduate...
click the sig that says Graduate... link you right to it.

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iight uppin or more feed...fucekn people sleep too much

You fucken people sleep way too much, just drop some feedback