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5 | 83.33% |
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1 | 16.67% |
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GKillaz vs Mr.Freeze
IP: 6AF0 D5AB
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10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-17-04 at 07:27 PM Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in. |
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IP: 6AF0 D5AB
Mr.Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 06:58 PM.
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6AF0 D5AB
This herb fails to get me shook or "Freeze"-Antagonize ya like a video of ya mom performin a strip tease~
Got this bitch on lockdown or a legally binding lease-We aint even clashin its just another oppurtunity to seize~ Ill pull out ya intestine and use it to hang ya by ur bars~ The onli thing u can hustle is purchasin burnt out cars-Ciz im "Ill" like i went Chinatown and caught a new form of SARS~ Im a Titan and u just a minor-a fraction of my finesse~ Servin ya up more than a roadside diner-So lyrically and spiritually ill lay this wigga to rest |
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IP: 0A09 2FF0
GKillaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 07:08 PM.
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IP: 0A09 2FF0
If you cant stand the heat then get outta da kitchen...
Guys-A-Bitch - Froze hi balls off - Now all I hear is bitchin... Im just like ya name becuz My Raps. Freeze ya... Last guy used a shit flow n rhymes dat all it took to beat ya... So you wanna see a guy who cant spit nor flow... Then go n read this whack reply dats written below... Im chewin this kat apart hes nothin more then a freezie... Mr. Freeze is unable to touch me like im posion ivy... You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section... Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection... Quick 10 lines man, G'd uock! |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: E499 D7BF
Uppin peeps.......{}{}{}{}{}{}{}{}{}The explanation that you have entered is too short. Please lengthen it to at least 50 characters long.
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Flyweight
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IP: D4FA A3B8
uppin, come on peeps.. we need some votes......
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IP: 23CC 11AC
Voted For: GKillaz
If you cant stand the heat then get outta da kitchen... Guys-A-Bitch - Froze hi balls off - Now all I hear is bitchin... 2/10. intro was hella played Im just like ya name becuz My Raps. Freeze ya... Last guy used a shit flow n rhymes dat all it took to beat ya... 6/10. haha,decent. So you wanna see a guy who cant spit nor flow... Then go n read this whack reply dats written below... 4/10... nah Im chewin this kat apart hes nothin more then a freezie... Mr. Freeze is unable to touch me like im posion ivy... 2/10 didnt rhyme at all. u cant even slant that shit You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section... Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection... 4/10First line was fairly decent.overall whack punch. This Battle sucked. Mr Freeze your structure and flow was hella off. soo that mainly caused me not voting for you. |
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
Voted For: Mr.Freeze
punches-tied multies-none wordplay-mr freeze creativity- mr freeze personals-none metaz-none realy vote-mr freeze return favor and vote on my battles |
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IP: 10D2 D962
UPPIN.. come on peeps.. leave a link n I return the fav...
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Killin' G'z
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IP: D4FA A3B8
Voted For: GKillaz
UPPIN>.. lets get some more votes!!!....
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TheB.E.S.T Crew
TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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Killin' G'z
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IP: D4FA A3B8
sorry bout that ment to click feedback, Ima go get that vote DQ'd right now
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TheB.E.S.T Crew
TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: CD98 49E3
Voted For: GKillaz
GKillaz05: ya verse was good bro. Not your strongest but still good. A good bit of wordplay and a lot of playing with his name made some strong personal hard-hitting punches. Had some good metaphors in there aswell. Best Line: "You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section... Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection..." -I was feeling this line. It was really out of this line and the opener. they were both funny as fuck! Worst line: Couldnt say really Mr Freeze: Mailnly i wasnt feeling ya verse at all. The structure was way off and it was full self-glorification with no real personals and no hard hitting good punchlines. I think you used a couple of metas but they didnt seem very good to me. Best Line:"The onli thing u can hustle is purchasin burnt out cars-Ciz im "Ill" like i went Chinatown and caught a new form of SARS~" I think this was as good as it got. worst: "Im a Titan and u just a minor-a fraction of my finesse~ Servin ya up more than a roadside diner-So lyrically and spiritually ill lay this wigga to rest" - No. Freeze bro, im sure you can do better than that but you came off weak this time. Keep elevating tho bro. Well done Gkillaz05
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IP: 5F1B CD30
Voted For: GKillaz
tight....tight! Killaz gets this on my opinion cos he thru punches at his opponent and wasnt "selfglorifying"(Mr.Freeze)..yeah u thru punches too but u were slightly on urself...but on ur part u had some gd multies...both had a gd structure..but killaz gets my vote for harder punches.. return honest vote on mine too...thanx holla!
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C9A2 1C80
Voted For: GKillaz
Mr.Freeze This herb fails to get me shook or "Freeze"-Antagonize ya like a video of ya mom performin a strip tease~ ^decent opener Got this bitch on lockdown or a legally binding lease-We aint even clashin its just another oppurtunity to seize~ ^first part was okay,second nah... Ill pull out ya intestine and use it to hang ya by ur bars~ The onli thing u can hustle is purchasin burnt out cars-Ciz im "Ill" like i went Chinatown and caught a new form of SARS~ ^could've been good set-up, too bad you ended it with self-glorification... Im a Titan and u just a minor-a fraction of my finesse~ Servin ya up more than a roadside diner-So lyrically and spiritually ill lay this wigga to rest ^good closer First of all fix your structure, it'll make it easier to read and more pleasant too. You had some potential in ya verse but worded some things a bit bad so it didn't really hit that hard. Try to avoid self-glorification and focus on your opponent, read some other battles and just try to get those punches more hardhitting.Vocab was good, flow could be lil better but overall decent drop though! GKillaz If you cant stand the heat then get outta da kitchen... Guys-A-Bitch - Froze hi balls off - Now all I hear is bitchin... ^hehe,nice opener Im just like ya name becuz My Raps. Freeze ya... Last guy used a shit flow n rhymes dat all it took to beat ya... ^rhyme with same word = big no-no... So you wanna see a guy who cant spit nor flow... Then go n read this whack reply dats written below... ^okay Im chewin this kat apart hes nothin more then a freezie... Mr. Freeze is unable to touch me like im posion ivy... ^decent decent You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section... Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection... ^good closer Flow n structure were tight, vocab could be slightly better...Had some good punches in there, could've been more hardhitting but it was aight for sure. Try to get bars like the second one out of your system though. Solid drop!
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