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View Poll Results: Mr.Freeze vs GKillaz
GKillaz 5 83.33%
Mr.Freeze 1 16.67%
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Old 10-17-04, 06:57 PM   #1
Mr.Freeze
Banned: Cheating
 
GKillaz vs Mr.Freeze

IP: 6AF0 D5AB

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Old 10-17-04, 06:58 PM   #2
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Old 10-17-04, 07:06 PM   #3
Mr.Freeze
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IP: 6AF0 D5AB

This herb fails to get me shook or "Freeze"-Antagonize ya like a video of ya mom performin a strip tease~
Got this bitch on lockdown or a legally binding lease-We aint even clashin its just another oppurtunity to seize~
Ill pull out ya intestine and use it to hang ya by ur bars~
The onli thing u can hustle is purchasin burnt out cars-Ciz im "Ill" like i went Chinatown and caught a new form of SARS~
Im a Titan and u just a minor-a fraction of my finesse~
Servin ya up more than a roadside diner-So lyrically and spiritually ill lay this wigga to rest
 
Old 10-17-04, 07:08 PM   #4
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GKillaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 07:08 PM.
 
Old 10-17-04, 07:20 PM   #5
GKillaz
Flyweight
 
From: Canada
IP: 0A09 2FF0

If you cant stand the heat then get outta da kitchen...
Guys-A-Bitch - Froze hi balls off - Now all I hear is bitchin...
Im just like ya name becuz My Raps. Freeze ya...
Last guy used a shit flow n rhymes dat all it took to beat ya...
So you wanna see a guy who cant spit nor flow...
Then go n read this whack reply dats written below...
Im chewin this kat apart hes nothin more then a freezie...
Mr. Freeze is unable to touch me like im posion ivy...
You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section...
Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection...

Quick 10 lines man, G'd uock!
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Old 10-18-04, 07:34 AM   #6
Mr.Freeze
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: E499 D7BF

Uppin peeps.......{}{}{}{}{}{}{}{}{}The explanation that you have entered is too short. Please lengthen it to at least 50 characters long.
 
Old 10-18-04, 09:29 AM   #7
GKillaz
Flyweight
 
From: Canada
IP: D4FA A3B8

uppin, come on peeps.. we need some votes......
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Old 10-18-04, 04:20 PM   #8
AutoMATIK™
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Voted For: GKillaz

If you cant stand the heat then get outta da kitchen...
Guys-A-Bitch - Froze hi balls off - Now all I hear is bitchin...
2/10. intro was hella played


Im just like ya name becuz My Raps. Freeze ya...
Last guy used a shit flow n rhymes dat all it took to beat ya...
6/10. haha,decent.

So you wanna see a guy who cant spit nor flow...
Then go n read this whack reply dats written below...
4/10... nah

Im chewin this kat apart hes nothin more then a freezie...
Mr. Freeze is unable to touch me like im posion ivy...
2/10 didnt rhyme at all. u cant even slant that shit

You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section...
Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection...
4/10First line was fairly decent.overall whack punch.

This Battle sucked.
Mr Freeze your structure and flow was hella off. soo that mainly caused me not voting for you.
 
Old 10-18-04, 04:31 PM   #9
frein-ma$ter
Banned: Biting
 
IP: 1BD5 13B2

Voted For: Mr.Freeze

punches-tied
multies-none
wordplay-mr freeze
creativity- mr freeze
personals-none
metaz-none realy

vote-mr freeze

return favor and vote on my battles
 
Old 10-19-04, 05:22 PM   #10
GKillaz
Flyweight
 
From: Canada
IP: 10D2 D962

UPPIN.. come on peeps.. leave a link n I return the fav...
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Old 01-05-05, 02:19 PM   #11
GKillaz05
Killin' G'z
 
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From: CANADA
IP: D4FA A3B8

Voted For: GKillaz

UPPIN>.. lets get some more votes!!!....
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Old 01-05-05, 02:21 PM   #12
GKillaz05
Killin' G'z
 
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sorry bout that ment to click feedback, Ima go get that vote DQ'd right now
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Old 01-07-05, 06:27 AM   #13
Dex
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Voted For: GKillaz

GKillaz05: ya verse was good bro. Not your strongest but still good. A good bit of wordplay and a lot of playing with his name made some strong personal hard-hitting punches. Had some good metaphors in there aswell.

Best Line: "You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section...
Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection..." -I was feeling this line. It was really out of this line and the opener. they were both funny as fuck!

Worst line: Couldnt say really


Mr Freeze: Mailnly i wasnt feeling ya verse at all. The structure was way off and it was full self-glorification with no real personals and no hard hitting good punchlines. I think you used a couple of metas but they didnt seem very good to me.

Best Line:"The onli thing u can hustle is purchasin burnt out cars-Ciz im "Ill" like i went Chinatown and caught a new form of SARS~" I think this was as good as it got.

worst: "Im a Titan and u just a minor-a fraction of my finesse~
Servin ya up more than a roadside diner-So lyrically and spiritually ill lay this wigga to rest" - No.

Freeze bro, im sure you can do better than that but you came off weak this time. Keep elevating tho bro.

Well done Gkillaz05
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Old 01-07-05, 06:51 AM   #14
Yvonne
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Voted For: GKillaz

tight....tight!

Killaz gets this on my opinion cos he thru punches at his opponent and wasnt "selfglorifying"(Mr.Freeze)..yeah u thru punches too but u were slightly on urself...but on ur part u had some gd multies...both had a gd structure..but killaz gets my vote for harder punches..

return honest vote on mine too...thanx

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Old 01-07-05, 07:37 AM   #15
DQ
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From: Alosta City
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Voted For: GKillaz

Mr.Freeze

This herb fails to get me shook or "Freeze"-Antagonize ya like a video of ya mom performin a strip tease~
^decent opener

Got this bitch on lockdown or a legally binding lease-We aint even clashin its just another oppurtunity to seize~
^first part was okay,second nah...

Ill pull out ya intestine and use it to hang ya by ur bars~
The onli thing u can hustle is purchasin burnt out cars-Ciz im "Ill" like i went Chinatown and caught a new form of SARS~
^could've been good set-up, too bad you ended it with self-glorification...

Im a Titan and u just a minor-a fraction of my finesse~
Servin ya up more than a roadside diner-So lyrically and spiritually ill lay this wigga to rest
^good closer

First of all fix your structure, it'll make it easier to read and more pleasant too. You had some potential in ya verse but worded some things a bit bad so it didn't really hit that hard. Try to avoid self-glorification and focus on your opponent, read some other battles and just try to get those punches more hardhitting.Vocab was good, flow could be lil better but overall decent drop though!


GKillaz

If you cant stand the heat then get outta da kitchen...
Guys-A-Bitch - Froze hi balls off - Now all I hear is bitchin...
^hehe,nice opener

Im just like ya name becuz My Raps. Freeze ya...
Last guy used a shit flow n rhymes dat all it took to beat ya...
^rhyme with same word = big no-no...

So you wanna see a guy who cant spit nor flow...
Then go n read this whack reply dats written below...
^okay

Im chewin this kat apart hes nothin more then a freezie...
Mr. Freeze is unable to touch me like im posion ivy...
^decent decent

You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section...
Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection...
^good closer

Flow n structure were tight, vocab could be slightly better...Had some good punches in there, could've been more hardhitting but it was aight for sure. Try to get bars like the second one out of your system though. Solid drop!
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