Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-20-05 at 04:17 AM

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DQ'ed.. went over line limit

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 04:18 AM.

d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 04:24 AM.

I erase weak rappers for pre-writing they verses…rehearsing what to say to JDOT, but far from perfect/
I merk kids, with no motive on purpose, ya lifes worthless
Imma show u how to be a holy loser like church did/
face tha facts.......ur records tha only thing u have to live for/
and if u was to die this moment, i think you'll still be ignored/
....yea, ur real DEXTORIOUS.....u work well with ur hands/
.........but feelin on urself dont really make u a man/
u cant connect these dots, other words, cant see me/
......ur played barz are more "skipped" than a "scratched CD"/
but i wont front, outside tha net, we are good friends, son
this nigga copped 2 blow jobs....and gave me one/
now thats loyalty...and cause we both from SAC, dont make U royalty/*
This nigga nut rides me so much, i think he spoils me..../
gota stop, im brain blocked...still i'll give u a merkin/
....Im da boss at this....and you?....keep workin/


*royalty-SAC KINGS....king=royalty



I GOT WRITERS BLOCK....GL fam

…knock out kings……I’m bout to dethrone this kid


Like cheap weaves… I’m about to split your wig
You can’t even fit the gloves that the baby is wearing in your sig
You’re a pyro? Well I’m bout to put you out of your place
You couldn’t pack heat if you put a Miami jersey in a suit case
You will never be the king of Sacramento; you’re not even a vet
So go ahead and buy votes from all those kids at new tech
Red beam, pyro, j dot, how any times will you change your name
his diminish is finished so he can no longer derange the game

all the personals are true

new tech is the name of his school and there are a lot of kids from his school that go on here

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

nice3 spit.....it is over 10 lines tho..........
and you where hella stretched,.......lol

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

Voted For: J DOT

Dj:

Like cheap weaves… I’m about to split your wig
You can’t even fit the gloves that the baby is wearing in your sig
decent
You’re a pyro? Well I’m bout to put you out of your place
You couldn’t pack heat if you put a Miami jersey in a suit case
no
You will never be the king of Sacramento; you’re not even a vet
So go ahead and buy votes from all those kids at new tech
meh
Red beam, pyro, j dot, how any times will you change your name
his diminish is finished so he can no longer derange the game
nah

J DOT:

I erase weak rappers for pre-writing they verses…rehearsing what to say to JDOT, but far from perfect/
I merk kids, with no motive on purpose, ya lifes worthless
Imma show u how to be a holy loser like church did/
no, this was self g and horribly structured
face tha facts.......ur records tha only thing u have to live for/
and if u was to die this moment, i think you'll still be ignored/
meh
....yea, ur real DEXTORIOUS.....u work well with ur hands/
.........but feelin on urself dont really make u a man/
decent yo
u cant connect these dots, other words, cant see me/
......ur played barz are more "skipped" than a "scratched CD"/
kinda played
but i wont front, outside tha net, we are good friends, son
this nigga copped 2 blow jobs....and gave me one/
yeh, decent
now thats loyalty...and cause we both from SAC, dont make U royalty/*
This nigga nut rides me so much, i think he spoils me..../
nah
gota stop, im brain blocked...still i'll give u a merkin/
....Im da boss at this....and you?....keep workin/
nah

Both verses wern't great yo. But J had a couple more punches, also he had an advantage having more lines. Dj had 1 decent line and the rest was pretty simple.

v/ J DOT

good lookin out on tha vote...imma up this....

and dont no one there vote on my battles, and if they ever have, then they all honest......