ight a 10 bar batlle first to 5 votes or a knockout yo can u spit first i gotta battle at this one site right now and 'ill post latta

sunshine, that must be a personality trate/
did u get that name cus ur gay, or u have to be home by eight/
get off ur knees, pay attention, and take ur mouth that dick/
say cheese, i forgot to mention, ur on candid camera...click/
showed the pics to ur pops, he damn near choked/
hes like, damn, i didnt know my son could deep throat/
im takin shots at ur mental, but i dont have a gun in my hand/
leave a hole in ur temple, without spittin as hard as i can/
u might look the part, but u dont have the heart of a man/
yo ass been spread so far apart, u be shitin water when ur sittin on the can/

you always carry nines cuz thats the age when You learned to suck dick// you write rhymes takin nyquil just to say that your sick// drug dealer?....... naw you build houses and claim u slang bricks//top dog on the corner?..........naw your just everyones bitch//this nigga made a square with his hands and thought he was takin pictures// and claimed he was half bulldog cuz he came from different mixtures//i fed him scooby snacks and got perturbed// said he'll just fly away cuz he was 1/4 mixed with bird//he wrapped his self with aluminum foil to say he had bling bling// and he said his name was ryano cuz he sucks rhino dingaling

MY VOTE GOES TO RHANO CAUSE HE HAD SOME TIGHT PUNCHES BUT KINDA FELL OF AT THE END SUSHINES WAS KOO TO BUT RHINO'S WAS BETTER

MY VOTE=RHANO

if you peep this i'd appreciate it if you hit us up with a vote much love and ~1~

uppin

its ryano not rhano, but thanks neway
1-0 im up

ryano

- showed the pics to ur pops, he damn near choked/
- hes like, damn, i didnt know my son could deep throat/

Decent wordplay there.

sunshine

- you write rhymes takin nyquil just to say that your sick//

Very played.

No beef, but this battle was weak. Ryano took this, but there really wasn't much here. Elevate! Get multi's in your verses, work on wordplay, and fuck the filler.

i go for ryano cuz sunshine had weak metaphors

damn sunshine no disrespect but you gettin KO'd erywhere

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