yo, yo, sit back, witness the skills the average niggaz lack/
infact, Hazaaam be dropping that hott shit, back to back/
certainly, chocke continuously, purchase numerous buddha, sacs/
bitch niggaz can't cope with mah raps/
verbally conquer niggaz, like catching rats using murderous traps/
perhaps, u should check the stats/
lyrically engage in such acts, like gettin' jumped by cops/
the supreme lyricist, who got maad hops/
kill motherfuckers like steppin' on lil' anthropods/
the supreme spit never stops/
hazaaam's back with the flavor that humans desire/
the illest' spit, like fire/ superrior to anyother/
mind focused on gettin' that cheddar/
after readin this shit on ur monitor/
son, evidence will show u, who's better/
thee assassin, the rap slayer, verbally able to create a catastrophe/ the effects of my rap ideology is similar to extacy/ that's why none of ya'll can come close to me/
not just hardcore thug poetry/
my verbal philosophy consists knowledge more than a library/ my personality gets very angry, when fake niggaz question the Don's authority/ if u step to me/
ur life will end up being a mystery/
i'll definitely cut ur organs off of ur body/
and write about it like Anatomy!!!!!!!!!!!

could use some multi's on it not a bad peice just kinda read a little simple that's all

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my verbal philosophy consists knowledge more than a library/ my personality gets very angry, when fake niggaz question the Don's authority


^^^ that shit was hot son! This was a nice post, i was feelin it fo sho. Keep drop'n that ill thug shit bwoy...and holla at me whenever you want for that colabo aiight, 1

i gotch u...

good lookin..

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NEEEDS PUNCHES AND IT CAME ARROGANT YOU SHOULD FEED THAT OTHER THAN THAT TIGHTNESS

uppin

I liked this shit alot man.. Keep flowin..
Thingz needed to work on in this verse...
More complexity punches, wordplay ect.....
Although i think a rap can be tight with a good flow alone..
Thast thing try to make ya verses equal..

haha welcome back, it's all good...this was a hot one my fav bars:



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i liked it but i just wern't feeling those 2 lines

It was aight, but you got too much of the simplistic words when, upgrade your vocabulary son, keep elevting! 1ne.

ayo cuzz shit was BLAZIN from tha beginning. ILL shit. but yo i agree wit tha cat above me saying bout tha vocab. Flow is cruncc but wit some ILL wordplay and sum like Einstein vocab shit be un-toucable or illz. shit i sat bacc and peeped it on mo gin cauze shit was HOTT.


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good lookin out...

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