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24 Hours To Live
IP: 2EE0 0D06
BOOM BOOM BOOM...
thats that tune of the glock drive by shootins workin around the clock ma brother...the victim now outlined in chalk its shock. its horror. cant walk, cant talk the only thing to do is to grab ma own glock. am huntin this gang,DOWN, as if I was a hawk so these fools are gonny die.. its al about revenge its a suicide mission...but av just got to avenge two wrongs dont make a right? cant you see my plight? ayo a just gotta fight twenty four hours till a put ma plan into action should create enough upset to cause nuclear reaction cuz it aint no doctor sealin ma fate its fuckers wit nines lookin to decimate a few hours left before i proceed yes im nervous, i just hope i succeed now am crusin uptown, with ma gun blazin its time to start, this fuckin hell raisin bam! bam! bam! ma piece is flying brothers dropin to there knees... they muthafucken dying but av been hit too..and now am sighing its ma last breath. another one eight seven, another victim of a violent death.... not really that related to the subject but just tried to do somthin different with the subject. give me feedback plz Lata |
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IP: 1636 8BC9
damn man i actually thinked it was...real bad
thats that tune of the glock drive by shootins workin around the clock ma brother...the victim now outlined in chalk that was aight the rest was played out and simple didnt really flow keep elevatin peace ez b |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
CAT HAT RAT MAT SAT PRRAAT get the picture u rhymin too much keep elevatin dunny
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IP: 6789 0975
wow.. i wont feelin this at all.. sorry dawg
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IP: 2F1C 584D
too simple, short bars...not feelin' it...1
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IP: 2525 FA52
It aint the end of the world, this is jus too simplistic, theres no complexity, no power in this... Thats what your really looking for... Everyone starts like this, jus keep spitting and elevating, look above for the tips... Try using some multies and complicate your bars to make a personal style and elevate through it... I seen worse then this sun so dont worry about it, jus put another script out, you will improve...
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