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11-22-04, 04:06 PM
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"Pieces Of Life" ft. Makaveli Trained
IP: 0825 899A
[[Intro]]
"Times Can Just Get So Crazy... Lifes A Game, You Gotta Play Even Though Sometimes You'd Like To Give Up... Some Times You Just Wanna Change Ya Hand And Start A New... But To Every Down There Is An Up... And Vise-Verse... This Shit Called Life, Its A Puzzle... Simple As That, Every Piece Fits... It's Your Job To Discover Where... [[Verse One: Atticus]] The Get Up, Break Down To Blessed Cups And Shakedowns... Dance Around With Head Up State Let Lead Bust, And Just Land Face Down... Write Meer Spits To Touch Who Hears It As The Mic Gifts Lyic... Might Lift Spirit But Life's Stress Strikes Alight This Fears Kiss... Pain Is Lush With Enough To Sustain Is Just To Much... Plagues Pace The Stage Abut My Waves They Touch Threw Brush... Events Replay In My Mind Rewind To My Dismay They Re-sent These Graves... Streets Lepped The Age Of Time, See You Find They Rezent These Days... You Dont Leave Threw Hope See The Streets Consume Whole Dreams... Abused And Beat To Beat I Blew Schemes That Crews Hold Deep... [[Verse Two: Makaveli Trained]] Too bad that life isn’t always 110% perfect N u didn’t always have 2 think about whether things r really worth it As if time were simply motionless, n u could go along by n by Rather than get jacked 4 ur watch n really watch time fly Ive suddenly been engulfed n this most unperfect predicament I kno myself wut im capable of, but still kinda reluctant Try 2 keep shyt on da down low, but manages 2 leak out Not a vow, more like a pinky-promise hoping 2 stand out I swear some these niggas would die n a day where im from But cuz im black n from b-more, don’t think that im dumb [[Chorus]] From Nees To Now... Stand Up To Take Seet In Ground... The Streets To Town House, Baby Its Just Right... As We Bust And Lay Stricken All In Just One Night... “Its Just The Life Baby!” From Nees To Now... Stand Up To Take Seet In Ground... The Streets To Town House, Baby Its Just Right... Rushed We Stay Just Pickin Up The Pieces Of Life... [[Verse Three: Makaveli Trained]] My life aint full of negatives, theres some positive shyt 2 Not the same down trotted kid off some street like 42 Jerked around n so many Angles, soon 2 b pullin da Trig As if things weren’t complicated enuff, now they want 2 sig figs Got a place of shelter, on the outside, it’s a movie-like scene But the inside only the antonym, a quite horrific dream And jus as u believe things might make a u-turn Ur soon another spirit watching over, as ur destiny n fate burns U kno how n dramatic movies, things r straightened out n the end? Well wut if that never happened, 4 some ppl this isn’t just pretend... [[Verse Four: Atticus]] Triumphs And Tribulations Stand Facing 9 Months Of Incarseration... In Dark Hearts Arts Are Pacient Waiting To Creat Lives From This Altercation... We're Possitive Thinkers Tinker The Possitive Inner Shier Gods Of The Lift... Matropolis Offered This Wisdom In Of Apocolypse Lost Words Of The Bricks... Surroundings Profound We've Found Ways To Ground Pay From Hurts Pouding... We Now Sing These Ways Of Fround Days To Stay In Some Sure Sound Things... Next Day Is Unsure Cuz Lead Plays The Hurst For Best Of With A Burner Aimed... With Every Great Day Lurks The Reverse Of Breath Thats Death Obscure Worlds Ways... Teaches Us Right From Preaches Cuz The Light Doest Like Leadin Us Right... We Gotta See Things Up Just Right Before More Strikes Scramble My Pieces Of Life... [[Chorus]] From Nees To Now... Stand Up To Take Seet In Ground... The Streets To Town House, Baby Its Just Right... As We Bust And Lay Stricken All In Just One Night... “Its Just The Life Baby!” From Nees To Now... Stand Up To Take Seet In Ground... The Streets To Town House, Baby Its Just Right... Rushed We Stay Just Pickin Up The Pieces Of Life... [[Outro]] Ya, Ya... From Nees To Now... Bound For Free Ground But Bleedin Now... So Deseaving In This World Of Oxy-Morons... Swhy The Pieces Always Come Ina Box Of Store Bought... Bought, Buds And Brews At The One Stop Shop... Re-Arranged My Pieces And Just Threw The Board Up... .One. |
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11-22-04, 05:28 PM
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New to RV
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IP: B788 F6A9
i like tha rhyme scheme, itz pretty good, not really feelin tha chorus on it, but i like tha verses, tite shyt *1 love*
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11-22-04, 05:28 PM
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Blow Me
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IP: 3B54 8295
dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope.. lol.. atty nice drop. liked the hook/chorus.. wasnt really feeling makaveli as much.. but both were dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope dope... 10/10
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11-22-04, 05:33 PM
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IP: 278A 380E
ab n mak this was very very nice, i liked the idea behind this one, different to wot anyones doin at the moment, structure was gud, as expected, flow was perfect went down real well in my head with plenty of multis, especially in the first verse...vocab was way above average....the concept was gud n i liked the chorus aswell....basically this was a very nice piece dawg, glad to see u back on here...pz
mark - 9.2/10 very dope return... -1-
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11-23-04, 07:47 AM
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#5
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1926
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IP: 0825 899A
Ayo...
Thanks For The Love Everyone... Good To Be Back... Upping For Some More Feedback... .One. |
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11-23-04, 10:16 AM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: 6CEA 0327
i was feelin this piece.chorus wasn't all dat but overall this was a good drop.8/10 for originality.keep em comin'
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-23-04, 04:19 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 0DA5 D7BF
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shit...^^^^what he said lol naw on tha real tho...yall drop was hot i was really feelin it yall came deep wit yall verses but still kept it some what positive...thats whats up ...we need more upliftin shit like that in the world i give yall a 9/10 takin off for the slack on the chorus still good shit tho...get at me if yall do a part 2 cuz i want in lol... ...holla at ya gurl
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My lyrics stay nothing but nice I use them to bring u down to ur grave after my sacrifice if you KNO ME you cant UNKNO ME unless u wanna DENY ME |
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11-24-04, 09:31 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
Was some pretty good shit brutha.
Abstrakt, you got an origional style, and sometimes I lose track of where your going with the words you use. But I see a lot of multies in there and the complexity of it is really good. Makavelli Trained, good verses.. I could understand where you were going better with your verses.. Cept at times the flow was choppy.. Good shit both of yas.. Peace. |
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11-24-04, 09:48 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 3AE8 B82C
ohhhhhhhh damnnnnnnnn dat shit was nyce yall
i was feelin all of it da verses but like rhymesoslick said yall slacked on da chorus..but i was still feelin it give u a 9.5/10
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11-24-04, 12:37 PM
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#10
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1926
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanks For The Love Everyone...
Upping For Some More Feedback... .One. |
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11-25-04, 01:25 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 0DA5 D7BF
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lol ^^^^ Rhymessoslick huh....haha u funny and once again good shit... pimpin stay on top...lol ...holla at ya gurl
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My lyrics stay nothing but nice I use them to bring u down to ur grave after my sacrifice if you KNO ME you cant UNKNO ME unless u wanna DENY ME |
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11-26-04, 04:38 PM
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#12
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1926
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IP: 28AD 5545
Upping...
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12-07-04, 06:04 PM
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Fuck Parents
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IP: 3240 794D
WUTTHAMOTHERFUKINFUK, no 1 told me this shyt wuz gonna b posted here, j/p
w/e |
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