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Old 12-08-04, 08:38 PM   #1
R.E.D.
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cut the shit, your on your way.

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So you state the fact that you are too good for me? You say I am too blind to ever see, you say it could never be me, you allow all of this happen letting it be.. Your corrupted files, endless denials, the fact of not facing this trial, has left me in all but a smile.. Your rage of faddism destroys me and my friends, corrupts us all never to end, I mean hell, where did it all begin? You all send yourselves flaunting, all you ever did was taunting, yet you still stand haunting.. Power to the mind and to the soul, I won’t ride this train out and dig myself in like a mole, get ready to face the consequences, here comes your black hole.. Your so called moral walls of popularity, dexterity, and fake charity doesn’t fool my keen eye at all. Its time to reform, the time is now, I’m sending you packing like to the dorm, all I can say is this is your final fake bow.. I don’t get what ya’ll believe, or how we are deceived, but all I can say, is that I will achieve.. If anyone will suffer it wont be me my anonymous, you should of heard me and gone along with this..
-r.e.d.
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Old 12-08-04, 08:40 PM   #2
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I Knew Thi,Yo This Piece Was Dope The Whole Vocabulary And The Flow..Deep Mayn Nice To See A Newbie With Some Skill,Only Thin Is Fix Your Strcture And You'll Tend To Do Well Around Here....10/10 Good Shit..HERB...Lol
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Old 12-08-04, 08:45 PM   #3
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Nice. good vocab and good flow. i felt this too which always help. one thing, u need to have some structure. If u do that then u will do well on this site. stay up RED. px
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