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Old 07-08-02, 04:40 PM   #1
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Ryano Vs Soulja

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first 2 5
3-0=ko
no biting
hating
crew votes
dick ridin
spit by 12:00 am
 
Old 07-08-02, 06:19 PM   #2
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ryano,reach into ya lungs and pull out ya last breath,
bring you back to life just to repound you to death,
you stepped first, now my 'peice' wont let you 'rest',
work with 'angelfire' to put the best 'blessed' 'bullets' into ya chest,
you aint even got ya wings-yet 'maggot'~ why you think ya so 'fly'?,
you just an in-sect faggot~ im so 'dope' ill leave you 'high',
i spit so quik ya reflexs aint fast enuff to prepare you for the hit,
betta give you a 'rubber''bike' cuz u 'ridin' so much 'dick',
u must be on 'lyrical viagra' cuz your so 'stuck up',
ill staple ya tongue to ya nutz then youll shut the fuck up!,
attack ya vocal chords leavin ya voice 'trojan hoarse',
smack u wit a force that leaves you 'condemned' from 'intercourse',
im 'coughin' out ya 'burial plot',
dis 'joint' makes ya lungs collapse wit one 'shot',
crawlin thru ya veins like a million 'ants' wit no 'uncles',
i see ya 'hungry' for a battle so heres a 'sandwich' full of 'knuckles',
i slap my 'tape' to ya head so you 'stick' to my rhyme,
this 'star' has reached its 'nova' now its my time to 'shyne'
this is the last tyme i listen to a u take ur power and abuse it,
so i throw my cd in ya face so you have to 'face the music',
 
Old 07-08-02, 10:54 PM   #3
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NEW RULE!

When posting battles verses, I do not want to see any " " in the verse, or { } brackets of any sort, in no way are you allowed to bring attention to your verse.

dumbass, theyre called rules for a fuckin reason/
its aight though cus i got u scared like its bitch nigga huntin season/
two blows from the shoty and yo ass left red/
you a ho like irv gotti, given damon dash mad head/
you say youre soulja, well wheres your hostile platoon/
cus you gonna need someone to hold ya while your in hospitle room/
you coughin out my burial plot cus i buried you alive/
your lungs full of dirt, aint no way you can survive/
did you cry....u know, the first time you got fucked from behind/
i bet u play quater back cus u like to stand behind the line/
you can reach for my last breath but im breathin easy/
im not worried, i used two horses cus yo moms so sleezy/
so eager to please me, but i had to back off/
when im done you can have her so you wont have to jack off/
 
Old 07-09-02, 12:05 AM   #4
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nice verse uppin 4 votes
 
Old 07-09-02, 12:24 PM   #5
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uppin

vote on soulja vs ryano
 
Old 07-09-02, 12:33 PM   #6
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pretty week battle but my vote goes 2 soulja he had more multie's and betta punches i liked da way he started off

Quote:
ryano,reach into ya lungs and pull out ya last breath,
bring you back to life just to repound you to death


vote=soulja

Last edited by k1ll@~m1c : 07-09-02 at 12:35 PM.
 
Old 07-09-02, 02:48 PM   #7
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"ryano,reach into ya lungs and pull out ya last breath,
bring you back to life just to repound you to death,"
HOT LINE TO START OFF............

"i spit so quik ya reflexs aint fast enuff to prepare you for the hit,
betta give you a 'rubber''bike' cuz u 'ridin' so much 'dick',"

good personal/multi

ryano


"you say youre soulja, well wheres your hostile platoon/
cus you gonna need someone to hold ya while your in hospitle room/"
JUST A CATCHY RHYME nice....

vote= solja

just felt his creativty more.........
 
Old 07-09-02, 04:25 PM   #8
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uppin
 
Old 07-09-02, 05:34 PM   #9
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Not a great battle here, but pretty even. Both had some nice lines for sure.

Soulja...
crawlin thru ya veins like a million 'ants' wit no 'uncles',
i see ya 'hungry' for a battle so heres a 'sandwich' full of 'knuckles',
Not bad.

you aint even got ya wings-yet 'maggot'~ why you think ya so 'fly'?,
Your best line.

Ryno
dumbass, theyre called rules for a fuckin reason/
its aight though cus i got u scared like its bitch nigga huntin season
Tight opening.
you can reach for my last breath but im breathin easy/
im not worried, i used two horses cus yo moms so sleezy/
so eager to please me, but i had to back off/
when im done you can have her so you wont have to jack off/
Nice ending.

Other than the beginning and the ending, your verse was pretty standard.

Overall, I thought that Soulja had some more creative punches, but he also had more that just didn't make sense. Additionally, he used the "quotes" on places where there wasn't even wordplay.

Vote: Tie. Please don't argue with it. I could have voted Soulja for a little better verse, or Ryno because Soulja for breaking the rules, but I didn't. Tie.

Peace
 
 


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