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Old 07-10-02, 03:38 PM   #1
L O C FUNK
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L.O.C. vs E-DUB (REMATCH)

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10 bar max
3-0 KO
1st ta 5 WINZ
NO CREW VOTES
NO D/R
NO HATE VOTES
NO FEEDING

DUB POSTZ 1ST IN 20-30 MINS TOPS. AND ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED. IF HE WINZ I TAKE HIS NAME OUTTA MY SIG.
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Old 07-10-02, 03:47 PM   #2
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i'm keying right now, so do da same.....

and dont drop when i'm finish..drop soon as u
finish keying..so we can make it a blind-post
to stop da feeding LOL
 
Old 07-10-02, 03:49 PM   #3
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I got ya playa....I dont feed anyway. I think that shit is whacck
 
Old 07-10-02, 04:30 PM   #4
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*1st rematch i been in*

30% of me



i rip torsos outta da backs of da wacks..
i got da tightes punches either spittin 15 barz
of text..or runnin 1-15 outta a gat/
lets raise da states and bet 50..so i can stack
a half of a ball(100) quickly..u spit of hatred
and envy..but no-need fo a check-in cuz i'mma
leve yo azz broken and empty/
u gotta go bail-out ur verse, cuz ur shyt been
reposess..u couldnt get ur 1st sex..even if
u wuz a insect/(ant=fuck-a-lot)
call me mr.dep cuz today i'm droppin special deleveriez on deez weak mc's..my shyt burns harder den da humidity of texas combined with da summer of tennesse/
and my model be da idol of biggie so some-body gotta die.. but u said u be damn if itz u, but look nigga, it cant be "I"/
so back up like juvy and gimme 50 feet..da only way u can be real if i buried u in da road, and say u died in da streets/
i leave'ya with pea-size holes dat will constantly bleed..
rob u for ur crown and pawn it in for a 5$ sack bag of weed/(dats how much it worth)
i got killin insticnt tendacies to do a LOC Funk in..and aint talking bout snitching..i'm talkin bout straight mic grippin to do sum funky butt-whole ass-whoopin/
slicin out dat un-develop brain u think-on..pull a-no-show and be gorn(gone)..or witness mo slayins den da kids dat be in dem country fields of corn/(Children Of Da Corn)
i might drop hot shyt or be cool wit-it..either way u look at it, u still gone get-it..after u read my verse u dint think da dub did-it..cuz i stick to da script and be so punch-line-it committed/
rockin text heads and soon i do da same to audios..but right now, da only way u can peep out da voice, is on radio..(loc funk turns on da sterio) sike, u stupid dumb-ass hoe/
when will u ever learn..second time battling will give ya a 2nd degree text burn..i brang heat to ur melon like beauty salon hair-perm..dat will travel threw ur blood-stream like bad germs/
and i'm only warning'ya..u dont wanna see me take-over'ya.. like polo did to nautica/
so just drop down ur guards and turn ur self-in..and if u wanna do a 3rd re-match, i can beta'cha again..with d same verse i just putted-in/

-1-

i know aint beat'ya da 1st time..but da last bar is sayin i won dis 1 and i can beat you again with da same flow..

and i putted 50% of me at da top..i'mma re-arrange dat and put 35..cuz i wuz in a rush and just typed anything like fuck-it...

holla

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Old 07-10-02, 04:48 PM   #5
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HEY HOMIE IT'LL BE JUST A SECOND. IM AT WORK AND HAVE A QUICK 10-15 MIN MEETING. I STARTED KEYING AND ILL FINSISH POSTING IN A SECOND....
 
Old 07-10-02, 05:14 PM   #6
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Aiight Im back! And here's my verse:

Imma threat ta E-dub like WHITE BOYZ wit BLACK TRENCH COATS in KILLARADO,/
& he couldn't get shit CRACK-ILLAC-IN if he smoked rocks in an EL DORADO,/
Matter of fact he's so PUSSY he gave my computer a YEAST INFECTION,/
Thats why my KEYS are ILL like ALICIA gettin drilled with a SYPHILLIS DICK ta tha mid SEX-SHUN,/
& Im sorry DUB FAG-SON(ms jackson), but IM FO REAL like J-LO & JA,/
& U winnin this battle is just a FANTASY like the average man & MENAGE ET TOIS,/
Dubz gettin SERVED like DIVORCE PAPERZ after a heated DOMESTIC BATTLE,/
Cuz Im dishin up HOT BEEF like BAR B QUE GRILLZ be doin ta CATTLE,/
& after I take tha dub (w) with this verse I should change my name ta DR EVIL,/
Cuz ur just like a wanna be MINI-ME tryin ta get a rep off this SEQUEL....SORRY HOMIE NO DEAL.


UPPIN FA VOTEZ......PLEASE MAKE IT QUICK AND PAINLESS FOR MY COMPETITOR....

(edited "wit" for "in" in 1st line before trench coat typo)
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Old 07-10-02, 05:15 PM   #7
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BY THE WAY HOMIE, THATS WHAT A 10 BAR LOOKS LIKE....
 
Old 07-10-02, 05:27 PM   #8
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UPPIN FO VOTEZ
 
Old 07-10-02, 05:36 PM   #9
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STILL UPPIN. COME ON YALL
 
Old 07-10-02, 05:46 PM   #10
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DAMN YALL QUIT SLEEPIN....
 
Old 07-10-02, 05:59 PM   #11
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uppin on dis
 
Old 07-10-02, 06:17 PM   #12
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AINT THIS A BITCH! ALL THESE MUHHFUKAZ AND CANT NOBODY DROP A VOTE UP IN THIS BIYOOOOTCH!!
 
Old 07-10-02, 06:20 PM   #13
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aight battle...here we go

DUB

rip torsos outta da backs of da wacks..
i got da tightes punches either spittin 15 barz
of text..or runnin 1-15 outta a gat/
lets raise da states and bet 50..so i can stack
a half of a ball(100) quickly..u spit of hatred

goodlines..its hard to find the rhyme scheme though...


i leave'ya with pea-size holes dat will constantly bleed..
rob u for ur crown and pawn it in for a 5$ sack bag of weed/

another nice line...you didn't need to explain with ()


LOC

Imma threat ta E-dub like WHITE BOYZ wit BLACK TRENCH COATS in KILLARADO,/
& he couldn't get shit CRACK-ILLAC-IN if he smoked rocks in an EL DORADO,/

hotline ryt off the top.....killarado nice...

& Im sorry DUB FAG-SON(ms jackson), but IM FO REAL like J-LO & JA,/
& U winnin this battle is just a FANTASY like the average man &

nice ....but we'll see if anyone else pics up on it...............

MENAGE ET TOIS,/!!!!!

both were cool....loc had easier flow to follow...less fillers..dub had more of them..got tired at the end of his vs. too long..
but loc had better creativity....if my vote counts()............


vote=LOC
 
Old 07-10-02, 06:24 PM   #14
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Yo I got y'a'll a vote here but do me a favor and check out Lil D' vs Ryano if you got the time or Lil D' vs Critic, whateva' you choose. I gotta say E-dub came with more punches but LOC's were felt more and his flow was smoother. At time dub got a lil choppy but don't get me wrong I was feelin ya verse, too. However my vote gotta be to LOC cuz it was smooth and lethal.

vote= LOC FUNK
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Old 07-10-02, 06:26 PM   #15
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umm ok heres my explaination



edub best lines:
when will u ever learn..second time battling will give ya a 2nd degree text burn..i brang heat to ur melon like beauty salon hair-perm..dat will travel threw ur blood-stream like bad germs/

i give your verse a 6.7

L O C bets lines:
Matter of fact he's so PUSSY he gave my computer a YEAST INFECTION,/
Thats why my KEYS are ILL like ALICIA gettin drilled with a SYPHILLIS DICK ta tha mid SEX-SHUN,/

and
& after I take tha dub (w) with this verse I should change my name ta DR EVIL,/
Cuz ur just like a wanna be MINI-ME tryin ta get a rep off this SEQUEL....SORRY HOMIE NO DEAL.

i give you a 7.1

punches=LOC
wordplay=LOC
creativity=edub

nice battle i hope that my explaination help yah in alot

my vote goes to LOC
 
 


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