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Old 12-17-04, 03:23 PM   #1
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Just Listen!!!!

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Yo Just Listen// I'ma crush a empire tonight/
fucc where u came from... ya thug card gon expire tonight/

I don't know what I did to make cats wanna retire my hype/
and when I ask who said it niggas voices is shakin' harder then brian mcknight's/

I got me a fat blunt made so I desire a light/
fucc this guy this bitch lack a reply cause he know he won't remember shit but the sirens tonight/

I'm jus a thug muthafucca unda the world's profile/
hot head that got lead please don't make me come out this shirt like hoe's on girls gon wild/

yea I do a lil dirt... definitely not on the rolemodel route/
I ain't slippin' got guns.. the only bacon on my block is at the Wafflehouse/

yea... Shyne got caught but come on.... do you really think i'm next/
not likely niggas wanna direct me like spike lee uh uh... not wit this milli and tech/

when i'm pissed off a whole notha person is born/
I pop pistols that will lay you in a hospital wit a fuccin turban on/

niggas been eavesdroppin' but neva are we stoppin/
ain't no nigga matchin' what my rhymes feed noggin's/

lotta niggas hatin cause I hustle hard/
and maybe cause... I drag niggas like american muscle cars/

every judge in VA wanna buckle LAW or send em to the cemetery/
I learned to Let It Burn cause a hater's time is temporary/

all my damn life I can say I been a rare g/
my fuccin heart is cold like a box of ben and jerry's/

niggas I ain't pic up a mic the mic picked me up/
slowed down my recless ways aimin techs and ak's and drinkin' straight jin outta dixie cups/

I get an urge to get on nerves not givin' a fucc how many ya men occur/
yall niggas ain't hood jus pretendin' plus ya blend in wit the burbs/
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*Golden Cat (KO)
*Young Soulja
* Sire (ND)

NOTABLE LOSSES
* Black Queen

NO DECISIONS
* ~Sire~

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Old 12-17-04, 08:40 PM   #2
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I need some feedback
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NOTABLE WINS
*Golden Cat (KO)
*Young Soulja
* Sire (ND)

NOTABLE LOSSES
* Black Queen

NO DECISIONS
* ~Sire~
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Old 12-18-04, 01:48 AM   #3
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mayb if you wrote something half decent and worth feeding on then you'd get feedback but keep doing ya thing and elevate work on structure, vocab, worplay, multi's cuz it adds to flow, a good rythem to it, stay on point, and just think your shit out a lil.....no hate just sayin how it is on the real

return the feed

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166580
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