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Old 12-21-04, 07:35 PM   #1
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Shut It Down (sneak Peak)

IP: 4FEA A3B1

Hook:
As I Keep Spittin Like I Spit It.....
Keep Twisting Like I Twist It...
The Game Is Shut Down....
As I Keep Flowing like I Flow wit It...
Keep Rolling Like Im rolling It...
The Game Is shut Down...


If You Shake My loose Change.The Flow I will never Lose It....
Keppin Confusion..To The Instituion...Use Diffrent Syles In My music....
Kill A Beat Before 60 seconds Gone....Spark Plugs From The Microphone....
Blast Like A Cyclone...When I Give You Mixed "signals" Like Hypro Roam....
Count Every Green Till the Millions...100 Problems From these Children....
Step On The Stage You Get A Early Retirement Like Ricky Williams....
My money Stacking Up Like A Cell Phone Bill On A Bad Plan....
When Half Of Yall Cant Get In New York Like A redsox Fan....
You know Who The Best...Losing Ur Breathe.Cuz Im the biggest Success....
I Change and re Appear...Have You changing Your Carrers.Like Ron artest...
Put A Crown On My head Place...Robe Around My Waiste....
Im The Champion Game Is Shut Down Like A Cpu with Expiring date....

Hook:
As I Keep Spittin Like I Spit It.....
Keep Twisting Like I Twist It...
The Game Is Shut Down....
As I Keep Flowing like I Flow wit It...
Keep Rolling Like Im rolling It...
The Game Is shut Down...
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Old 12-21-04, 09:23 PM   #2
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pretty nice shit here....
Kill A Beat Before 60 seconds Gone....Spark Plugs From The Microphone....
Blast Like A Cyclone...When I Give You Mixed "signals" Like Hypro Roam....
not bad shit through n through...i thought this piece was dope.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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Old 12-21-04, 10:37 PM   #3
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pretty good...very well done with the wordplay, vocabulary, metaphores...and so on...this was a good peice...now check mine links in the sig
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Old 12-22-04, 11:11 AM   #4
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werd thanx uppin.....
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Old 12-22-04, 11:21 AM   #5
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this was some good shit here man...nice vocab and flow...i liked the hook and tha verse...this was nice man...8/10

yo Polifick...if u aint in no crew...come to Tha Darkside...we're recruiting good and active heads and i would like u join...so wut do u say?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167496
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Old 12-22-04, 11:23 AM   #6
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ill think on it thanx
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