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07-12-02, 02:24 AM
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newesy drop' YouTh 0f 2dAY '
IP: 5FC1 93FF
 Last edited by JOeY TeRRIFYING : 09-26-02 at 11:42 PM. |
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07-13-02, 12:47 AM
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IP: 5153 3B92
5 peeps and none replied, i guess thats cool.
joey |
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07-14-02, 12:38 AM
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IP: 2CD7 CDB3
10 views and no replies, thats kewl
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07-14-02, 04:17 PM
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IP: F564 0E15
ok... this peice had a strong message to it... and that message is tru and strong and more people need to learn it... the rymin was good too.. but the flow flucutated WAY to much.. one line that didnt ryme some where, a 3 lines in a row that rymed... if u work out those little peices, that can make the world of a peice..... but good message and good meanin and virtures... keep it flowin
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07-15-02, 12:09 AM
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IP: 5153 3B92
thank you for that, specialy the crticism. now i can elevate from that.
joey |
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07-19-02, 09:30 AM
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IP: CED0 32B8
Sorry bout da sleepers
i always got luv fo` ur ish ... no doubt! Diggin dis on da real, i mos def feel wha u spittin here! Much props, Head up ~1~ |
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