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...Xclusive... 5 83.33%
Epic 1 16.67%
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Old 11-09-04, 11:26 PM   #1
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...Xclusive... vs Epic

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Battle Rules:

10-19 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Crew Battle
No Beef


Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 11-14-04 at 11:26 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.
 
Old 11-09-04, 11:27 PM   #2
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Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 11:27 PM.
 
Old 11-10-04, 08:47 AM   #3
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is this for the pink battle?..................cuz if not then tell me why i should accept this
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Old 11-10-04, 12:10 PM   #4
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o and i aint writing 10-19 bars thats to much for a text battle...so its 8-12 reset the battle...or i will...
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Old 11-10-04, 05:33 PM   #5
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>l. Yea This Is For Tha Pink Battle Naw 8-12 Is Small Talk Cuzzin How About 10-14 Then????
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Old 11-10-04, 07:11 PM   #6
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...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 07:11 PM.
 
Old 11-10-04, 07:12 PM   #7
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10-14 bars is still way to many 20 lines hell no...how about like i do 10 lines thats good enough fuck
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Old 11-10-04, 07:13 PM   #8
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10 Lines Lol That's Like Newbie Shit Lmao Naw 10-14 Fam
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Old 11-10-04, 08:50 PM   #9
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"...Xclusive..." Your Nothing Get "X'ed" Out No Excuses
Lyriclly Your Fuckes Cuzz My Rhymes Is Abusive
And'll Put Your RV Career To A Thing Called Conclusive
It's An Elusive But You Winning This Battle Is An Illusive
Kid's Empire's Long Lost Son Now How Wack-Is-That?
White With A Hat? Sorry Kid But Uh..........Black-Is-Back
Lyrics Intact You Back Thaat Will Crack Ya Brain Threw Ya Hat
Infact My Lines Will Interact With Your Punny Little Brain
That Will Change Ya Game Make You Pre-fix You Gay Name
Kid's Not A "Head" How Is It When He's Straight "Pussy"
Had To Dq Votes Cuzz He Couldnt Beat Oreo Tha Cookie
Kids A Joke Recycle More Lines Then Fucking Collage Rule Paper
Imma Sit Back And Wait Cuzz I'll Elivate To Tha Top Like A Sky Scraper
 
Old 11-12-04, 02:01 AM   #10
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Epic gets “emotional” when oreo signs on to rapverse…
Thats why they joined forces so they’d be a “happy” curse…
Then catches a disease from oreo named the mad cow disease…
Now can no longer squeeze a shit out then ur eyes turn Chinese…
Pink is for “goofs” and then you try to wear it every damn day…
Who do you think ur pulling a steveO from “jackass”, im right eh…
Da R.I.P we da undead you “cant” fuck with us you useless maggot…
Nothing “can” hurt the undead and that’s why your such a faggot…
The reason why you go with a “ridiculous” colour is becuz ur poor…
Your rhymes are “pathetic” that’s the reason and soon many more…
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Old 11-12-04, 03:17 PM   #11
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uppin............................................. .......
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Old 11-12-04, 05:57 PM   #12
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Voted For: Epic

vote=epic
epic got my vote because the oreo lines in there it's played you and oreo's beef dont got a part of this more like you dissin oreo more then you dissin epic,epic's vocab was decent i like his multis structure was decent i felt how the flow was arising

Kids A Joke Recycle More Lines Then Fucking Collage Rule Paper
Imma Sit Back And Wait Cuzz I'll Elivate To Tha Top Like A Sky Scraper
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good line kind of stretched tho but it was a decent line i liked it

Kid's Not A "Head" How Is It When He's Straight "Pussy"
Had To Dq Votes Cuzz He Couldnt Beat Oreo Tha Cookie
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pretty good line one of the best you spit but not the best you spit

this next line was a killer

Kid's Empire's Long Lost Son Now How Wack-Is-That?
White With A Hat? Sorry Kid But Uh..........Black-Is-Back
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i think that line is what hurt his feeling lol empire line was dope
yo keep it up

"...Xclusive..." Your Nothing Get "X'ed" Out No Excuses
Lyriclly Your Fuckes Cuzz My Rhymes Is Abusive
And'll Put Your RV Career To A Thing Called Conclusive
It's An Elusive But You Winning This Battle Is An Illusive
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multis came good vocabulary was nice that "x" line was hard
yo thats another line that killed it

...xclusive...

Epic gets emotional when oreo signs on to rapverse
Thats why they joined forces so theyd be a happy curse
^^
yo the oreo lines is played son take it some where else

Then catches a disease from oreo named the mad cow disease
Now can no longer squeeze a shit out then ur eyes turn Chinese¦
^^
decent line best line of it all good shit son best line of whole verse

Da R.I.P we da undead you "cant" fuck with us you useless maggot
Nothing "can" hurt the undead and that's why your such a faggot
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never made sence son maggots eat the dead so there for you
gave him an advatage that line was an advantage for him

Pink is for goofs and then you try to wear it every damn day…
Who do you think ur pulling a steveO from jackass, im right eh...
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another good line but i dont think ther wear pink everday yo

over all epics vocab and his structure was murderous lines hit harder
punches wasnt really on for both of yall or word play but X had some metas
nice shit but his vocabulary was recycled faggot he alwasy uses fag or faggot in his lines
epic came with something fresh and multis was on target some good shit yo
but i see none of you followed the rules bad yo strobe should shut it down
but yall both agreed so yea back to vote........good battle both came good
in some ways...both had good flow

punches=none
vocabulary=epic
multis=epic
metas=...xclusive...
wordplay=not really
flow-both

vote=epic

p.s. if you dq this then we all know your a hater and always dq ppls vote........oh yeah by the way pink is a blood color just to let u know....
 
Old 11-12-04, 06:01 PM   #13
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^haha i had punches i should of had the mark for them o well nothing to worry about someone who dosent understand complex rapping so w.e uppin..
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Old 11-12-04, 06:04 PM   #14
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Hold Up Lemme Guess Cuzz You Gone DQ That Vote Lmao Well It Was Surely Explained Mayn You Forever DQ'Ing Peoples Votes Ahaa........
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Old 11-12-04, 06:08 PM   #15
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This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...

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yo exclusive that is a good verse man, nice punchez, nice structure, good vocabulary and a pretty nice flow, keep that up its a good verse and u a good textee...
epic man ur verse is aiight, but it seems like ur verse has been forced man, some ur lines dont even make sence anyways good battle you to..
 
 


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