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Old 07-11-02, 05:26 AM   #1
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Week 5: Topical open mic winner

IP: 4577 CD9A

i'll be honest i wasn't feeling the pieces all that much this week i hope next week not like this week no offense to any that wrote i usally enjoy reading the piece but this week was kind of blah i seen illness from all you so lets see some nice work this week

this weeks winner is
F-MONEYBAGS
Doctor just gave me the bad news, got 24 hours to live/
I'm mad now, so I grab the gun and spit the clip in his rib/
I yell "Nurse", she comes thru the door/
Told her to provide me sex, right on the floor/
She said yes while the doctor's dead/
Not seein' his dead body, she provides me head/
The door is locked it's four o' clock/
I'm a knock this whore on the spot/
She screamin', got others worry/
She tells me "hurry"/
Cause she thought I was a 1 min man/
Turned out to be an hour, her fuckin' pussy is try as sand/
Then I finally bust a nut, she screamin' "what the fuck"/
I said gotta go hoe, only got 22 more hours to go/
So I sneaked out the window, the buildin' only had two floors/
Jumped in my two door, called up my man and told him to meet me at the food court/
As I got in to the mall, my dog was in the corner smokin'/
I said "I got 24 hrs to live and I'm not joking"/
He drops his blunt right when a astroird hit's earth/
It wasen't big, cause we still breathin' while I get shitted on by a bird/
I say fuck, I'm dyin' might as well go out wit a bang/
He said what u gonna do, I said point blank the president/
What am I sayin', I'm goin' nuts/
While this dude in the parkin' lot doin' donuts/
Then I realized life is all about gettin' recognized/
So all the wrong doer's get victimized/
I tell ma friend "peace" while I go cop a bazooka, shit's big in size/
Cause size does matter, I'm a splatter their insides/
So I go to the nearest police station, and one shot left that shit in smoke/
All of them are dead, who's gonna chase this "ghost"/
Then a state troopers gets behind my car/
As I was headin' towards the bar/
All of a sudden a fuckin' helicopter shows up/
I said "O fuck", I ain't goin' no where, I might as well blow up/
I pulled over and got out quick/
Shot the helicopter down, and before it hit the ground/
The fuckin' cop shot one threw my dome/
For a split second I turned and aimed toward his chrome/
And squeezed but nothin' came out/
The bullets were flammed out/
And my time ran out, I'm headin' towards the hell house/
Got decieced in my 16th hour/
But left the city in a blood shower/

THERE IS HIS VERSE LEAVE ANY QUESTIONS COMMENTS HERE
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Old 07-11-02, 02:16 PM   #2
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Damn, I won 1....wow, I feel proud
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Old 07-12-02, 03:32 PM   #3
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Wish mine hadn't been late

Check out Topical Open Mic Week 5 post by OnSlaught to read it
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