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07-11-02, 05:26 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Week 5: Topical open mic winner
IP: 4577 CD9A
i'll be honest i wasn't feeling the pieces all that much this week i hope next week not like this week no offense to any that wrote i usally enjoy reading the piece but this week was kind of blah i seen illness from all you so lets see some nice work this week
this weeks winner is F-MONEYBAGS Doctor just gave me the bad news, got 24 hours to live/ I'm mad now, so I grab the gun and spit the clip in his rib/ I yell "Nurse", she comes thru the door/ Told her to provide me sex, right on the floor/ She said yes while the doctor's dead/ Not seein' his dead body, she provides me head/ The door is locked it's four o' clock/ I'm a knock this whore on the spot/ She screamin', got others worry/ She tells me "hurry"/ Cause she thought I was a 1 min man/ Turned out to be an hour, her fuckin' pussy is try as sand/ Then I finally bust a nut, she screamin' "what the fuck"/ I said gotta go hoe, only got 22 more hours to go/ So I sneaked out the window, the buildin' only had two floors/ Jumped in my two door, called up my man and told him to meet me at the food court/ As I got in to the mall, my dog was in the corner smokin'/ I said "I got 24 hrs to live and I'm not joking"/ He drops his blunt right when a astroird hit's earth/ It wasen't big, cause we still breathin' while I get shitted on by a bird/ I say fuck, I'm dyin' might as well go out wit a bang/ He said what u gonna do, I said point blank the president/ What am I sayin', I'm goin' nuts/ While this dude in the parkin' lot doin' donuts/ Then I realized life is all about gettin' recognized/ So all the wrong doer's get victimized/ I tell ma friend "peace" while I go cop a bazooka, shit's big in size/ Cause size does matter, I'm a splatter their insides/ So I go to the nearest police station, and one shot left that shit in smoke/ All of them are dead, who's gonna chase this "ghost"/ Then a state troopers gets behind my car/ As I was headin' towards the bar/ All of a sudden a fuckin' helicopter shows up/ I said "O fuck", I ain't goin' no where, I might as well blow up/ I pulled over and got out quick/ Shot the helicopter down, and before it hit the ground/ The fuckin' cop shot one threw my dome/ For a split second I turned and aimed toward his chrome/ And squeezed but nothin' came out/ The bullets were flammed out/ And my time ran out, I'm headin' towards the hell house/ Got decieced in my 16th hour/ But left the city in a blood shower/ THERE IS HIS VERSE LEAVE ANY QUESTIONS COMMENTS HERE |
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07-11-02, 02:16 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 2F1C 584D
Damn, I won 1....wow, I feel proud
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07-12-02, 03:32 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 564F 9464
Wish mine hadn't been late
Check out Topical Open Mic Week 5 post by OnSlaught to read it |
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