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12-25-04, 03:04 AM
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'Member Those Golden Days
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Unmatched Gifts
IP: 23DA 1D3E
Unmatched Gifts Hustling and bustling trying to make it to the saftey latched door, not noticing that she has dropped her supply of tinsil on the floor. This is the Christmas, the one that will forever be remembered, the lights outside will glisten, and the turkey will be tender, She rushes to her job to try and pay for the Xmas fines, Not realizing she has left behind he little boy's Wish list behind. She comes back to get it, to find the house in a mess, The turkey, presents, and now cleaning just adds to the stress. So she tells her son to behave, for their is much work to do, but the last words out his mouth were, "I want to spend it with you." But she was too busy moving to hear these simple 7 words, Inside her mind "So much to do" were the only things she heard. So she went and got the turkey, the presents were safe in the car, She thought it would finally be perfect, but money only reaches so far. On the Eve of Christmas it was time for her son's play Well everything is taken care of, I can take off this day. So she went to his school, and enjoyed the show, Thinking about her son made her realize how big he had grown. As they pulled into the garage, she felt something was wrong, She wondered why these feeling were lasting so long She looked inside and saw the presents were gone, nowhere to be found, she couldnt hide her remorse and just cried aloud, Mommy, dont cry, we don't need those things, Because the joy of having u, no present can ever bring. So this is a lesson, to those who have gone off the path, you may think your doing great, but u can still come in dead last! 15 min keystyle i made to try and win 1 million dollars from WickedClown, unfortunately i only got 2nd place, but 100,000 isnt bad. |
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12-25-04, 03:32 AM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: A34C 61B2
Wow, this poem is amazing man!!! I like the story, how she worries about making Christmas fun instead of having fun with her family, and then at the end she realizes that family is what christmas is all about not presents.. much props
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