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01-02-05, 05:22 PM
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Un D Syded Problems
IP: C6E7 FB58
Links : http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1866695
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1866701 ------------ This aint nun great..im still VERY NEW to audios so yea i aint great but its w.e im the SECOND guy on the track...eZ uppin rates.. ------------ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/t...lem215music.htm ^^--Un D Syded Problem--^^--By: Tha Problem ft. Un D Syded a.k.a RaZarE BaRZ--^^ ------------ Uppin on sum feed please i aint great , so dont spaz out ... 
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  Rap Verse Record : 2-0 (2 K.o.Z) Last Person Funeralized : dOpEbOi 210  Highlight Records |
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01-02-05, 05:33 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: BF65 5728
quite dope.....the beat is niiiiiccccee - send me it plz...........turn the lyrics up on ur verse man.......ur flow sounded good, and sum nice vocab in places.........u rode the beat well,ur verse would hav been dope wid ur vocals higher.....
2nd verse was aight, a bit mumbled, but his flow like urs is on point, get rid of the JAws Shit at the end, gotta be worst outro ever and get rid of it in the beginning track betta jus fading in with he beat RTF wid a vote on ma first eva audio battle - link in sig
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01-02-05, 05:42 PM
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IP: C6E7 FB58
Im the 2nd guy an the jaws beat at the end was on the track already...we could get rid of it so we juss made a jaws intro to match the ending...plus we had to cover up a bump in the beat from wen we deleted sumthen...anyways thnx an ill return the favor...upz
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Rap Verse Record : 2-0 (2 K.o.Z) Last Person Funeralized : dOpEbOi 210 Highlight Records |
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01-03-05, 03:07 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 3463 AACF
Uppz on this please...
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Tha Problem
Rap Verse Record : 2-0 (2 K.o.Z) Last Person Funeralized : dOpEbOi 210 Highlight Records |
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01-04-05, 01:44 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: 4425 3C10
it was an ok track, can tell ur new to it, flow is off, well not so much off as forced. but good looks,
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