lethaly inject verbal incision murder ya WHOLE MASS/
yo HOLD no GATS i read you an ya fake THROW-BACK/

no takes HOLD THAT, brooklyn new york HOME of VULTURES/
CHROMES an SOLDIERS we ill nigga written on STONES an BOULDERs/

i rape ya CULTURE, the way my spits SCORCH ya CORPSE/
HORDES is GORED as i rush an eleiminate with FOURS an ALL/

Ya CAUSE is LOST when i snipe-ya shot ya CHEST an VITALS/
mouths is LAI-ABLE for ya death so i stand with VEST an RIFLE/

ya BEST is miniMAL, i'm keying these scripture LOOSE-LY/
TRUTHFULLY underrated niggas claiming i BITE i do i i eat out PUSSIES//

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Decenet vocab here n there, an wordplay too, punches could have been harder, but it was straight homie, just keep elevating an learn too build up too your punches better, an learn too have more effective punces too, seemed too lack creativity in places

but for a keystyle, it was straight

Leave feed on my open mic called Look Mom

Peace

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this seemed a bit forced in finding rhyming parts .. wordplay was simple .. simi nice peice .. keep at it ... return the fav

thats why this was a keystyle....a keystyle is a freestyle in text... there is no complexity...

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dumbest shit i've heard .. i kno wut a keystyle is kiddo i aint no newb ... just because it's a "key" dont mean it cant be more than basic .. up ya game is all im sayin 2 u..