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01-02-05, 07:14 PM
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'Member Those Golden Days
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Watching In The Mountains (continued)
IP: 7822 F3B7
The next morning I was woken by, “Happy birthday!”
“Wha.. what?” “Happy birthday son!” “Oh thank you. What time is it?” “Well, why don’t you check, Roger?” “ With what? I don’t have a clock. Our clock is in the kitchen.” “ Not anymore hunny! We got you a watch!” “ Really?” I asked. “ Yup, RJ. Here you are son.” I looked over the watch. It wasn’t the best, but then it wasn’t like others. It had a blue wristband, it looked liked it had been cleaned a little bit. The frame was black and gold with some silver. The really odd thing was the time. It showed the time like most watches, but instead of 7:30 it showed 20,001,122,012,515. The date also was there. It showed the month, day, and year. “Hey mom, why does it show that huge number?” “I don’t know. I can’t change it though. Maybe you can.” They left after the fun was over. I looked it over again and noticed the buttons on the side. They said: mode, time, set, and when. That’s weird. I went over the watch carefully. Everything I tried wouldn’t fix it. Finally I figured I would try the when button. I pressed it and all of a sudden my room started spinning. I looked around and saw nothing but a blur. I pressed the when button again and my room was back. “What was that?” I thought. “Maybe I was dreaming. Ya that’s it, I was dreaming.” I pressed when again and my room disappeared. I was in the blur again. I hit the button again and I saw my bed. I went down to my parents and almost screamed,” Mom, Dad, where did you get this watch!?” “ Now honey that would ruin it.” “ I don’t care if it is used! I want to know where you got it!” “ Listen honey,” my mom trying to coax me. “ No! Mom I pressed a button and my room would disappear. I would re-press it and my room would re-appear! It’s amazing!” “Now, RJ son, you know that it is just a watch?” “I know dad, but its amazing! Watch I’ll do it again!” |
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01-09-05, 01:25 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 8D5B 2407
Wow, pretty good story man, you should really continue it, cuz now it gets me thinking where the watch came from, and why did it blur?? overall very good piece... The conversation also made me think of wut happend to the parents? lol..
7.8/10 -Dabatos
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