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Old 12-22-04, 03:22 AM   #1
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d.j em sce.....stop fallen for me

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aight this beat was made from b general so big ups to him


but yeah my girl wanted to get ont his track..baiscally becuz she is the insperation for this song....but yeah the first peron is my girl..she is sining
and then i spit...then the last person you here is her sining again.....

aigth i made this in one day so its wat it is

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Old 12-22-04, 03:29 AM   #2
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well.. she tried...lol

u sound lazy as shit......like u won't even tryin to rap

props for doin the track though..

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Old 12-22-04, 03:30 AM   #3
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i made it in like 1 hr...she tried..lol she did try...she was shy as shit......and im not that good with cool edit....so yeah she tried and i tried...
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Old 12-22-04, 08:11 PM   #4
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Flow was straight....you needed to raise your vocals a little though. I liked the message. Second verse was off a little with the flow. I think I might have placed your vocals in the wrong spot on our collab, cause it seems like you flowed a lot better in this.....anyway, it wasn't a bad track......quality could use a little work, but that comes with practice
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Old 12-23-04, 12:59 AM   #5
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Shit Was Decent I Liked It Once You Get Beter Quality It Will Be Better Thats Why Your Gurl Aint Sound So Good You Need Better Mixing But Still Good Shit I Liked It You Got A Flow Kinda Like Sonofisis Which Is Good Overall A
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Old 12-23-04, 02:48 AM   #6
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thats for the feed back...but yeah i was in a hurry when i made this track becuz my girl was getting mad at me for spending more time with my cpu and my music then her...so i decided to put her on the track.......she said she dont like her voice becuz shes too shy right now......but yeah i should have asked triple n or someone to mix it for me...
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Old 12-23-04, 04:17 PM   #7
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ya you need to raise your mic voloume up i think just a tad bit...but toher den that it was a tight song...keep it up the flow was good and everything else was good...good job
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Old 12-23-04, 04:52 PM   #8
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what the hell thats you spittin and you was talking about murdering me in a battle lol shit if you wanna battle go on and set the audio battle up
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Old 12-24-04, 02:25 AM   #9
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i would kill you bitch...that was some ill shit right there man...seee im on onther level than you kid.........lol but go ahead and set it up i will merk oyu...........45 sec spit...go ahead and do that shit son......lol wow you really think oyu can merk me.......lethal you my first victim....



i want even gonna stoop to oyur level but ohwell....
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Old 12-24-04, 07:40 AM   #10
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im doing a track to this also
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Old 12-24-04, 11:25 AM   #11
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It was cool but i wasnt really feelin the girl on it it was gud though keep at it dj
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mutha fucka I just told you to set it up because recently you posted something about me saying you wanted me to start beef with you and shit well set it up because I dont really know how
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Old 12-24-04, 02:47 PM   #13
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aye nigg a you wanna battle or collab......it don matter to me
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I like this beat

DJ send it to me
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Old 12-28-04, 02:40 AM   #15
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it in the rhythmic thing right below this forum....b general made it
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