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12-27-04, 11:46 PM
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wreckin shit!!
IP: 2421 3211
Chea,u jacks face it,u know the kids destined
to be the Ace since, sacred ages after David! critics publicky poundin the pavment in amazement like Spoiled white kids misbehavin! Listen closely as I tell u how Slit throats be of Niggas tryin to approach me,milk em for the cash and, watch em"break fast" as I pop the Toast B! they provoke me, to vent anger and blow steam then i poke three holes into there whole spleen! unload on your whole team,only time u "clap and bust caps" is when prayin with clasp hands and Folded Knees! yall niggas is whipped mommy blowin kisses,that neva hit ya and u fall like Oak Leaves! To u lames dismay,i ll cane a bitch in the face to her teeth fold and nose bleed! Hoe please,if u thinkin im take u home to my ole 'g like a trophy "hood rats" get sick chasin after old doe B all they come up with is mildewed money clips from molded cheese! the girlies see me playin with dough,and they hungy hopin that im clumsy chea, i "crash whips" while test drivin but that dont make me a Dummy! chicks say they love me, but I see ultriormotives of young dames, could be the same snake tellin the DEA, yeah for him I slung Caine! Most yall niggas is sweet and easier to eat than Rice Puddin not to mention i narrowed down my competion til im the only "nigga in the game" Pitchin like Dwight Gooden! when i bust the eight yo,witnesses will be like damn where his face go!...Oppose and get crushed like tomatoes in preggo! and the mic u niggas should let go..or get ya bars broke down in pieces like leggos! Yo i state my claim im one of the best lyricist point blank g ill leave ya favorite battler "upset" like a New York Yankee! fuck that get jabbed in the neck with tha numba 2 or catch scripts from my larynex thall pummel you! every thing stops when my pen drops, we disagree and like a bitch ya lips pops! u niggas dirt level in hip hop Get step on like flips flops! and all because niggas lick cocks, dont mean they spittin "ill drops"! |
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12-28-04, 12:40 AM
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Yeah,This Account = Alias
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IP: 3240 794D
^^yo nice flow and vocab..need help on ya structure though....and i was sorta feelin ya shit...last line was dope just thought you should no dat...overall it waz pretty tite...
And do ya wanna battle?get back at my thread in bitch slapped if ya do fam. |
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12-28-04, 10:41 AM
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IP: 2421 3211
thanx for the feed back fam
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12-28-04, 10:53 AM
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...Simply The Best
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IP: 0825 899A
this was aight...ur flow was off a little but u came pretty solid...5/10
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12-28-04, 11:06 AM
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lol
IP: 2421 3211
let me see u do better !!!
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