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Old 12-30-04, 01:34 AM   #1
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Fuck CALI!!!

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Ur Dumb u couldnt pick up my lines with a fork
Our u Confused ya Name says Cali but u Clamin NEWYORK!!
nigga ya flow is basic,face it...Cuz the kid will leave u swollen and scarred..,
when the gauge spits,Youll get ya face lift like Roseanne Bar!
Make ya brain shift..when i spray clips..U Lame BItch
My language will maime kids.. with vivid scripts sacred,
Release blatant spits, gays im lacin quick
leave ya face achin and ya body shakin naked in my basement!
Yo, u a bitch we all know u well,! so own up u cant erase it
U can try not to smoke this L,
but ill have u runnin back to "Puff" just like Mase did!
I knew it was only so long u could keep yo gay tendecies enclosed
The closes to pussy u ever got,was suckin on ya mothers dildo!
So u dare to Show?you a local rapper its rare u blow
me Shook?lol there u go..We all know ya flow Couldnt scare a crow!
CAli, ya ass so when I knife this line ,youll be split in 2
FYI i dont miss,so when the smoke clears youll look like a hoola-hoop!
U weak kid..ill turn your concietness to meekness..I rap mean
Defeat me?please kid,U speak against Prophecy,and Blaspheme!
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Old 12-30-04, 01:48 AM   #2
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^get a mic fag and ill son you fucka text
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Old 12-30-04, 11:23 AM   #3
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nigga what u bitch nigga im not feelin u Son 4 real!
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Old 12-30-04, 11:26 AM   #4
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cali aint gon battle u text he 2 pussy. but good drop i been sayin da same shit 2 him and his bitch brotha 4 tha longest, they aint shit dawg fuck 'em
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Old 12-30-04, 11:41 AM   #5
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thanx my nigga i aint feelin that nigga at all
4 real man fuck that nigga he so fuckin cocky whne he aint go tshit to be cocky about!
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Old 12-30-04, 11:43 AM   #6
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4sho dawg ........i think da nigga gettin raped in my sig is him
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Old 12-30-04, 11:56 AM   #7
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Lol^^^........................
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Old 12-30-04, 06:07 PM   #8
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So im sayin u gonna battle me or what Cali................
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Old 12-30-04, 11:45 PM   #9
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Forks dont pick up lines... Try to make it something a fork picks up but makes sence in rap too...

Thats all i read to tell the truth...

Nice to see beef where it belongs though.
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Old 12-31-04, 12:10 AM   #10
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this was a nice, effective diss. it had everything. complexity in some parts and a really good flow throughout the entire verse. this hit hard and had a good rhyme scheme..especially towards the end. you had some good metaphores in there and some other shit that made me laugh lol. really nice job on this diss.

8/10
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Old 12-31-04, 12:33 PM   #11
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thanx my nigga fro real good to see somebody that knows lyrics on the real
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Old 12-31-04, 01:07 PM   #12
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no hate but Cali beef is kinda old... but any way it was aight.... not the best, use better vocab and a better structure... 5/10 no hate
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Old 12-31-04, 01:45 PM   #13
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u think so ......................
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