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Old 12-29-04, 07:45 PM   #1
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Breath ........take a second i reckon that u wanna battle
da vocab is abstract leave fags shooken like baby rattles
It's evident and irrelavent no need 4 you 2 investigate
but continplate regularly to understand my twisted fate
Now ain't i BadBoy fuck waves my afro Puffy & trust me
fuckin a duckling with rubber will leave yo children ugly
Wordplaya plays on words since i was little u heard
why bcuz my nigga there was sentence on my curves
Im fuckin Ludacris eatin Chicken&Beer in a RedLight
my District breeds tharrow breads so im feed right
Meaning either wit BigMacs fuckin ribshacks burnin my heart it's
cuz im engaging wit bitches whose tits stick out like goldenarches
Sweeter than Ben&Jerry meaning very high in glucose
you 'nuts' motherfucker i 'pea' on before i 'roast'
The most valueable player on words or even bitches
so snithces end up wit stitches 4 tryin fuck wit my riches
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Old 12-29-04, 11:25 PM   #2
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this is allright, flow would be better with a better structure, rhyme's are ok.
over all 5/10
keep dropping.
remember your link's.
return the feed link's in sig.

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