Rhyming like EMINEM

Above the rim with stats like brims on hats sit on
Heads write legit threads get read like the book of Psalm
On all mission like tall technicians fix computers and mix
Drinks at Hooters on my spare time, my affair blind and sick
My girl plays around and lay down with other brothers
Got lovers on the side don’t use rubbers with pride another
Thing stay stress for a DNA test don’t know baby mine or others
In a failed relation folk wanna bail out this boat stinking
And sinking like the titanic, a type panic I face when thinking
When we walk arm and arm I’m being stalked and alarmed
By cats I don’t know they won’t go they insist on bringing me harm

Nice drop bra.......an I love tha verbal usage.........keep write shit like dis an good things will happen...........

Return tha favor on "Evil Ambition" thanx

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Didnt sound much like eminem..

Where was the smart ass punchlines n shit..

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i agree with the other brothers don't know where it sounded like eminem but i'm still lovin' 'em

Hmm...definetely not Eminem shit, but Im loving the multies and the flow...Your shit is crazy man...Solid drop...1

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not enough vocab usage in this. i was feeling it though.decent work.

thanks for the critique and the props

return the fav and leave me some feed on the 2 open mics in my sig...thanx...1

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Dope. Sounded a little like Eminem but I know for a fact that he is way more dope. Leave feedback on mines.

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thats a lie you ain't rhyming like eminem cause he rhyme all simple now and he only spits about how benezno and ja don't like him and some time about his kid. I like your shit better then eminems nouf said

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^^ weerd...Eminem fell off alot during that bullshit beef...1

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that was decent i see the em conection sound like you mad at folks always stalkin you not lettin you have your peace keep it up if you like em check out my open mic in my sig thanks 1

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

Some kids in here saying this kid is better than Em?

You can be quick, jump the candlestick burn ya back...
And fuck Jill on a hill but you still aint jack...

-Eminem...

OK, umm, i dont think this kid can compare...

Cause when i smoke out, i hit the trees harder than Sunny Bono (Oh No!)

-Eminem...

Nope, kid doesnt compare...

And for the multies...

Well than what the fuck you stop-for-dummy-if-you-slew-some-crack...
You'd make a-lot-more-money-than-you-do-from-rap...

Not even close...

Straight drop though, aint tryna take anything away from it, but no, he isnt better than em, or even comparable.