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Old 12-11-04, 03:58 PM   #1
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Diagnosing of Hiphop Ft.Indepth

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Congestion and indigestion are both part of this lesson...
Adjacent polar opposites can only seem to stressen...
Our lives, break out in dance like you break out in hives...
I look out for me: Can't break your twenty, all I have is five's (its all lies)...
The attitudes displayed in the music thats played...
On the radio and television leave me dismayed...
I'm overwhelmed by how one-dimensional this shit can be...
Artists say it speaks to the masses,but it's not you or me...
Fuck fans and culture,banks and businessmen are all they see...
Commercial possessions to Mc's? Like Honeycomb to bees...
Fuck "one's and two's,' you could count these dudes' misuses in three's...
I can hear the lies and fakeness, but it seems that noone sees...
What's real. Consumers are gettin a sour deal. And I'm'a be the one to squeal...
Refuse to kneel,Refuse to allow artists to steal,yo Indepth, come on and tell em how you feel...


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Hip Hop..The one reason your clothes is nice..
the reason Male's nowadays..with rings..and know the price..
let's not forget..rap's also how thugs knowing christ..
we not just about hoes and ice..we growing heights..
Hip Hop..the culture..the music..orginals to remix..
Archipanures...from running the streets screaming..to meetings..
we are in movies..guess starring on all the shows
being on all the parts and request's live..and who all oppose..
can leave us alone..we've grown..we leave the bus alone..
if the streeets quiet..we must be gone..we gone..u must be wrong..
I take my rhyme book everywhere..and I tuck and hold..
from the club songs..and the tear ballats.when your brothers gone..


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Like a spark in the night, we bring the truth to the light...
We never lose on the mic, just ride the beat like a bike...
When truth fades from sight, we ride in like brave knights...
And overshadow the wrong with what's right...


(Wicked One)
Now its about what type of gun u carry n shoot,no truth from these youths thats why there's dispute...
And certain ones in the booth think its cute to tell lies n stories its why the media refuses to compute...
If Mc's are so righteous they would stop biting n speak real insight that enlightens...
Enliven their flows share what they know instead money,guns,n ho's is what they writing...
I'm tired of the mainstream making others believe when ur famed in the public ur the ultimate MC...
Hip hops infected by a disease of acting n stunting bling creativity n heart is just a memory...
The dedication n determination is empty its upsetting...
Its putting shame to the industry n whos to blame simply anyone money heavy...
If you get dough n your benefits show than they turn you pro with imminent flows...
Most of these labels arent' able to find genuine artist so they sign any regardles of what they know...
It'll take more than cash to bribe me of sparing my talent that u haven't fouded just to fame u fast...
I'd rather crash n burn than sell myself n return for fortune not receiving the respect i deserve atlast...


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R-A-P-...The best music..to uplift..and a gift to hear..
RAp no to violence..it helps..and expreses prison fear..
and they blame us on everything..shows displayed on sally..
and Wanonna Bradly..although in it we are alone sadly..
But the music lift's up when are alone and are dragging..
when our pants are sagging..its not a statement..its a style..
but when you wearing tight pants..its dressing now..been found..
this what rap is about..Indeph Wicked one..we are acting out..
we all are a faction now..one crew one label..are true no fables..
its like..If its stupid to be getting paid for words..and flow like me..
why do we honors those in poetry..no conspiricy.. believe em
if you can't spell crap with rap..you can't spell trap for growth either


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Like a spark in the night, we bring the truth to the light...
We never lose on the mic, just ride the beat like a bike...
When truth fades from sight, we ride in like brave knights...
And overshadow the wrong with what's right...
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Old 12-11-04, 04:04 PM   #2
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....came out good....
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Old 12-11-04, 04:09 PM   #3
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this is pretty dope both of you had some good wordplay and both of you flowed almost perfectly... good vocab from indeph and good hook to it i was feeling that... indeph i was really feeling your last verse it had a certain emotion to it that made it real dope.... only problem i had with this was wicked one's structure but still a dope piece

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Old 12-11-04, 08:49 PM   #4
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Thanks.....for the feed Flow.......anyways Uppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnn.........
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Old 12-12-04, 03:22 PM   #5
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Old 12-12-04, 03:59 PM   #6
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10/10.....need i say more?
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Old 12-12-04, 04:22 PM   #7
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Another dope drop...had everything in it: good flow, straight vocab, hot wordplay....*impressed* Keep on dropping guys! Loved it...

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Old 12-13-04, 10:49 PM   #8
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Old 12-14-04, 10:21 PM   #9
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