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Week 7 Heavyweight Championship (8-0) Black Flame Vs (7-0) Chicken
IP: D385 5AAC
30 LINE MAX..
VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!! VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE. |
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IP: 3CF8 0898
8-1 isn't THAT bad of a record.
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IP: 5153 3B92
naw but 9-0 is better but 7-1 is not bad though still descent
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IP: 3CF8 0898
Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised
I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You Left Me Confused, Saw Your Skill, How’d You Get The Belt? It Was A No-Show Win Against Phynam, Because You’re Less Than Felt Wrecked And Dealt, Like Adoption Agencies, I Own Kids And My Style’s So Ruthless And Flawless It’s Virtually Homeless Know This, Herb Is Weak, I’ll Easily Fuck Him At Leisure I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name Abusing The Lame, Worships Me, He Think He’s Sick When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films Battered And Drilled, Want To Win? You’ll Have To Get Real If We’re Going Blow For Blow, Like Gay Oral Sex Deals This Vet Feels, I’ll Rock Your Post Until You Lost The Votes And It Took You Long Enough To Realise That You’re Not The Goat Drop My Foe, Shouts: “He’s The Illest!”, I’ll Eat Your Lyrics And Fuck Clubs, I’ll Hold A Grudge And Still Beat You With It You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody Broke Emcee, I’ll Down Your Wrotes And Clown Your Posts You Had A Mental Breakdown When You Weren’t Aloud To Vote Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks You’ll Lose, Slut, Fuck This Bitch, I’ve Had Just About Enough Of This I’ll Knock The Breadth Out Your Chest When I Crush Your Ribs Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken" |
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IP: 5153 3B92
posting soon
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here is my verse
IP: 5153 3B92
things to know chicken=listen=case sentive
at battle time i don't even acknowledge this child, just another wack textcee that bites abolish's style/ i'll stab you to make sure i stick in, it's like i was eating a girl out the way i am eating a chick in/ i'll serve you with a break fast just like dennies whore, your like 90 year old models your not looking good anymore/ scared to pick up a mic so you stick to text shit, you could be a runaway patient and couldn't make a sick exit/ this battle your losing it like going senile, you like Ru Paul just a faggot in denial/ convex is fixin' to flex, tell me this how can you listen to text/ i'm not gay so quit trying 2 do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got herbed by a newbie/the only way you getting head from a chick if you behead her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know Hip hop better then you/I'll make u show ur brains the way i hack heads, stop sweating me u need to Kick Rocks like ex crack heads/ like a barber i take off the top, this herb will get dropped, like weed dealers running from the cops/ like a uterus I'll envelop ya child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't develop a style/ you don't like women you prefer to see mail, bitch you can try on your wedding dress and couldn't prevail/ you never lead like a chaser you always follow, the only reason you eat kids is because you swallow/ your not looking good like a whores health, i'll drown you in your blood to prove that your full of your self/ editing because of spelling mistakes peace Last edited by Massive : 07-20-02 at 10:05 AM. |
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IP: 7336 18D6
this was a close battle. imma go wit black flame. he had a little better word play and punch lines. but chicken ya verse was aiight too. holla.
vote:Black Flame |
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IP: 5153 3B92
Ill battle.
Chicken... The beginning was hot. Nice personals. Also, the personal about the battle with Liquid Flame was tight too. Ill multis throughout. I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather Ill wordplay. Ahhh! When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships Damn. Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks Nice. Black Flame... Nice verse. Some solid punches and good multis. it's like i was eating a girl out the way i am eating a chick in Your best line. like a uterus I'll envelop ya child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't develop a style This was nice too. Vote: Chicken for an overall excellent verse with more hard hitting punches and personals. Peace |
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i just noticed
IP: 4577 CD9A
your not looking good like a whores wealth
naw it should be *Health* |
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IP: D6EC F6AA
I Enjoyed readin This Battle..You Both Were pretty Even In Punches And Both Came Hard..This Was A hard battle To Decide A Winner..Chicken You Came pretty Nyce With Some Raw Punches..And A Okay Flow..Black Flame Your Shit Was Nyce Too..I Think You Came A Little Harder With The Punches Tho..Just A Tad Better..LMAO@The Line Talkin About How Chicken Got Herbed By A Newbie, That Was Me..I Didn't Kno Chicken Was Case Sensitive..Hah That Battle Was Old As Fuck..Anyways..You Had A Tight Flow..Off At Times But Tight..So Black Flame gets My Vote..It Was verry Hard To Decide..But I Read Both Verse's Again And I Think Black Flame Got This With Okay Personals And Dope Punches..Here Are Some Lines I Was Feelin..
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Really Feelin This..It Hit Hard.. Quote:
I Liked That Line..Dopeness.. I Would Go Into More Detail But Its Late And Im Tired As Fuck.. Vote - Black Flame |
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IP: D385 5AAC
UP
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Vote=blackflame
IP: ADA5 96A2
B/C he came wit more punches, harder punches, and he was more original...eventho both yall had some played lines here and there
Listen Quote:
^thats been played and flipped so many times Quote:
^also really played besides your first & last couple of barz flowing well you really didnt have nothing to eye popping black flame Quote:
^this was an highlight Quote:
^another highlight |
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BREAKDOWN::
IP: D385 5AAC
LISTEN=CHICKEN
Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You DECENT OPENER HERE,SETUP WAS COOL,PUNCH I FELT COULD OF CAME ALITTLE HARDER BUT GOOD Left Me Confused, Saw Your Skill, How’d You Get The Belt? It Was A No-Show Win Against Phynam, Because You’re Less Than Felt PRETTY GOOD PERSONAL HERE,THOUGHT COULD OF BEEN HARDER, Wrecked And Dealt, Like Adoption Agencies, I Own Kids And My Style’s So Ruthless And Flawless It’s Virtually Homeless NICE SHIT HERE,SETUP AND PUNCH GOOD,PUNCH WASNT REALLY HARD HITTING Know This, Herb Is Weak, I’ll Easily Fuck Him At Leisure I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather I FELT THIS WAS FILLER HERE,SETUP WAS USELESS TO THE SECOND COUPLET FOR THE PUNCH Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name THIS WAS USED WELL I WAS FEELING THIS PERSONAL HERE NICE PUNCH ALSO Abusing The Lame, Worships Me, He Think He’s Sick When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships NOT FEELING THIS ,FELT IT WASNT WORDED WELL AND PRETTY MUCH UNEFFECTIVE Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films AGAIN NOT TOO HARD HITTING BUT WAS COOL,I WAS FEELING THIS ,BUT PRETTY MUCH A PLAYED CONCEPT. Battered And Drilled, Want To Win? You’ll Have To Get Real If We’re Going Blow For Blow, Like Gay Oral Sex Deals COOL,NOT REALLY FEELING THIS This Vet Feels, I’ll Rock Your Post Until You Lost The Votes And It Took You Long Enough To Realise That You’re Not The Goat LOL,THIS WAS COOL,MADE ME LAUGH ALITTLE ,NOT TOO EFFECTIVE THOUGH BUT FUNNY Drop My Foe, Shouts: “He’s The Illest!”, I’ll Eat Your Lyrics And Fuck Clubs, I’ll Hold A Grudge And Still Beat You With It OK,REWORDED BETTER WOULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody OK ,DECENT PERSONAL,NOT HARD THOUGH Broke Emcee, I’ll Down Your Wrotes And Clown Your Posts You Had A Mental Breakdown When You Weren’t Aloud To Vote NOT FEELING THIS Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks I THOUGHT SETUP WAS NICE BUT THIS COUPLET WAS UNEFFECTIVE CAUSE YOUR SECOND LINE WAS NOT HITTING HARD,FELT THE PUNCH WAS REALLY WEAK. You’ll Lose, Slut, Fuck This Bitch, I’ve Had Just About Enough Of This I’ll Knock The Breadth Out Your Chest When I Crush Your Ribs THIS WAS DECENT,I FELT IT, Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken" COOL ENDING ,NOT PARTICULARLY HARD,BUT WAS COOL BLACKFLAME at battle time i don't even acknowledge this child, just another wack textcee that bites abolish's style/ i'll stab you to make sure i stick in, it's like i was eating a girl out the way i am eating a chick in/ THIS WAS PRETTY GOOD OPENER,WITH A GOOD PERSONAL IN THE SETUP AND A GOOD PUNCH FOR THE SECOND COUPLET i'll serve you with a break fast just like dennies whore, your like 90 year old models your not looking good anymore/ scared to pick up a mic so you stick to text shit, you could be a runaway patient and couldn't make a sick exit/ THIS I WAS FEELING EXSPECIALLY THE SECOND COUPLET THE SICK EXIT PUNCH,THE SETUP WAS COOL,BUT THE PUNCH WAS NICE this battle your losing it like going senile, you like Ru Paul just a faggot in denial/ convex is fixin' to flex, tell me this how can you listen to text/ SETUP WAS BLAH,PRETTY MUCH FILLER TO ME, THE SECOND LINE WAS COOL,BUT REALLY NOT A HARD HITTING PUNCH. i'm not gay so quit trying 2 do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got herbed by a newbie/the only way you getting head from a chick if you behead her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know Hip hop better then you/ SETUP WAS OK,IF REWORDED WOULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE,I FELT THE KANGAROO PUNCH WAS NICE GOOD HARD HITTER I'll make u show ur brains the way i hack heads, stop sweating me u need to Kick Rocks like ex crack heads/ like a barber i take off the top, this herb will get dropped, like weed dealers running from the cops/ THIS RIGHT HERE WAS OK,NOT REALLY FELLING ANYOF THE LINES like a uterus I'll envelop ya child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't develop a style/ you don't like women you prefer to see mail, bitch you can try on your wedding dress and couldn't prevail/ NOT REALLY FEELING THIS EITHER,WEDDING DRESS SHIT WAS COOL,BUT PLAYED you never lead like a chaser you always follow, the only reason you eat kids is because you swallow/ your not looking good like a whores health, i'll drown you in your blood to prove that your full of your self/ UMM GOOD ENDING HERE,I LIKED THE LINE EAT KIDS IS BECAUSE YOU SWALLOW THAT WAS COOL, THE FULL OF YOUR SELF LINE WAS ALSO COOL,PRETTY GOOD SHIT [b]BOTH VERSES WERE VERY NICE,I FELT BLACK EDGED THIS CAUSE HE HAD MORE PUNCHES IN HIS VERSE,LISTEN I FELT CAME NICE,FLOW WAS REALLY WELL,NEEDED SOME MORE PUNCHES IN YOUR VERSE MAN,BUT IT WAS A NICE VERSE VOTE BLACK FLAME |
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ThA BaDmAn Is HeRe NoW
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IP: 1CD7 9133
tha battle was hott, but black flame got it cuz he had hotter punches and a nice flo.
vote:blackflame |
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IP: 7352 9D22
Iiight This was a really nice battle ..
i'll start wit chicken .. "Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You" Damn That was dope as Fuck .. haha it made me laugh .. "Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name" That was a nice personal .. Very dope "Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films" This was crayz .. It was prolly my favorite line of the match .. "You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody" Haha ..that was nice .. it made me laugh .. Nice wordplay .. "Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken" That was an iight endin .. you could have made it better .. Dope Verse Chicken .. Much respect .. Now on to Black Flame ~ "at battle time i don't even acknowledge this child, just another wack textcee that bites abolish's style/" This was a nice personal .. Dope line .. and a nice start .. "i'll serve you with a break fast just like dennies whore, your like 90 year old models your not looking good anymore/" This was an iight line .. although i felt it was played as fuck . "scared to pick up a mic so you stick to text shit, you could be a runaway patient and couldn't make a sick exit/" OMG .. This line was dope as fuck .. DAmn . . i loved this one "i'm not gay so quit trying 2 do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got herbed by a newbie/" Um .. haha .. U.E. Beat Listen ? .. i peeped that battle .. Listen could have came much doper .. lmao .. "your not looking good like a whores health, i'll drown you in your blood to prove that your full of your self/" Kinda .. iight endin .. could have been better .. either way .. dope verse .. Final Decision: OK .. Chicken came dope as fuck .. i was feelin most of his lines .. he came really nice .. Black flame came nice .. but i didnt quote as much of his shit .. cause most of the end of the verse .. was gettin Really played .. Like there were all like "chicken couldnt" "Like" / .. Then the next line would be almost the same but just another played line .. i dunno .. i feel chicken came dope here and i was a great battle .. MY VOTE- CHICKEN -payce |
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