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Old 01-01-05, 05:42 AM   #1
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Shots in top lyrical fitness that's why you bit this
get this, I got a witness and I won't quit this
and flip flop, get dropped, shit I'm in tip top shape
lyrics escape, can't even catch them with tape
main attraction using my brain as a fraction
Yall niggas just drama, my metaphors blow action
of my knowledge or wisdom a lyrical rhythm'll give 'em
stuck to their moms scared to battle, with they're umbilical with em
a migraine, before I reign on stage
you better walk like the fingers on a yellow page
rhymes and homicides are lethal, nobody's equal to me
no one survived, so why make it a sequel?
I cold grip the mic, strike then rip his life
my raps dilapidate adversaries with kryptonite
hit you with a verse, make you disperse but first
call up a hearse 'cause LCV be leavin you worse
than this, brain cells shatter, MCs scatter
I splatter them all with something that ain't even matter
got a ladder on stage women runnin', comin' every age
but never wit ring on my finger this thing'll linger un-engaged
renegade, I ain't afraid of no one, so get it straight
no gun or son, I'm gettin' paid and my rec's gettin played
every weekend like lottery, rap's a part of me
words flow but don't show no blood in you artery
ladies greet me, treat me like the stars
when I show up they start to throw up all their panties and bras
rap is the last of me, as blasphemy, I make rappers have to pee
and send you into a mental catastrophe
this rhyme ain't designed for prime time
and a battle line for logic behind every mind
tryin' to rhyme with intellect, spellin' all incorrect
defy your every line, i bet rappers are better in Tebek
those in the premises will always remember this
record, elected your top ten, stop then and reminisce
PeeJaY, no rapper get worse than me
when it comes to rhymes every verse will be
harder than titanium, parts from your cranium
burst, disperse, every verse explodes like uranium
so, yo, don't upset me, 'cause that will only get me
mad enough, it's bad enough, I had enough of these
lettin' this amateur rock a cord or wallabies
Yall just a bunch of wanna be G's, you better off swallowin these
my style is dope, just admit it
you can't cope and you hope to go out and get it
you're captivated, activated, rap related fans leave infatuated
when I get open the place starts smokin'
you start chokin', LCV and PeeJaY get broken
rehearse a while, let it get versatile
I reverse your style, ok, be then maybe I would smile
you're the fattest, baddest, of the best copycata's
when you played it, it's rated G for garbage 'cause that's your status
nobodies iller on the mic, or a top spitter
you never know when I'mma strike 'em like the Zodiac killer
this twenty two year old veteran, you ain't better than
medicine won't help, slicks think we're peddlin'
when writers bite and hype the type parasites swipe
you're bitin', you're stage fright, cant even hold the mic right
Niggas yall weak
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Old 01-01-05, 12:51 PM   #2
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WTF !?...

Your horrible Get That horrible rhymes outta here ..
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Old 01-01-05, 02:10 PM   #3
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it's actually really good some of it didn't make sense but most of it did and it all went together never went off track and was pretty long
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