Intro,im back,and loaded crushin any mc any crew in my stands
so basically its fuck everybody who ain't running with me
LETS GO!!!!!!!!!


the takeover kill snakes wit bullets and leave em stoned over
murder these mc's for actin like fake soldiers,, die slower
empty niggas out and sit em down like cup holders.(load up)
im ill(homie)i spit past the margin,split niggas in part N's
(get it)face on the obituary fuck the milk cartons(oh yeah)
steppin over the site like pordon.im just more harden
mc's fail when they aim at me for super stardom(hurt em)

so face it,im high as a ny skyscraper best in lyrical phases
can't replace this(are you stupid)ya niggas is basic(like cable)
im straped with hard times,and slave days haterit flow so bladed
ya mc's still in the dark like lost cave men,not 50 i kill many men.what a pen(im the fuckin best)
cuz lets not get physical yo son it would be nothing for me to get rid of you/,bitch slap thru rhymes and watch cats wordplays snap run laps on ya'll undersize the whole site like unlocked caps(haahahahah)
check the facts or get your neck facin the axe spit bullets wars
and have your body a throwback.

LOOK my status rules,some say a NAS mind wit JAY-Z attitude,
so let me drop ether and roc some fellas dude ya through(come on
came up from the roots,gunz poorness,thugs mamis and timb boots
i waist no time when its on i just shoot put death in you
so who want it.WHAT CREW?its the takeover

i take em out signle handed i only give luv if granted
souls abandon(just vansih)ya don't get me like speakin spanish
im loco loco(que que)ham ass niggas get sandwiched/
have your mustard all over the board i talk raw make lungs
like cold slaw(oh shit)you want beef show me some I.D like corner stores/
no under minded mc's F-A-B-O-L-O-U-S-just breatheeeeeeeee
i got more then tricks up my sleeve,
more like rhymes guns every weapon to make any nigga bleed/
i'll never leave,always comeback take the thrown back wit ease
ya niggas is like a females touch son just a tease(whoa)
who beatin me NOT YOU ,NA NOT YOU,(the whole site can hate me i thug my way thru)

LAST CALLOUT
i guess you can say im unsigned HYPE right? scribe got the source in flowz im to nice(ya like 2,3,,4,,5,when i roll dice
if you say you a live wire,get spliced,with a knife
JAMAICA QUEENS 149 st now in the lime light.
yo my mind touch niggas soon to touch figuers,
and all you other cats throwin shots at scribe you only get
half a bar FUCK YA NIGGAS.


nuff said.i got the war paint on.

~Sin~
Scribe



u have 24 hours to drop a link or this will be closed....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

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Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece
in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war

overral rec-19-13-12-
aka R.I.S.E.

album done-One Vision
2nd album commin soon/

think spiritual,and the heaven will come
and with that said you can never lose/

the scribe

mad flow dogg
nice multies 2
Nice structure very easy to read and understand
Im feeling the ( )
good job

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HITMAN INC MOTHAFUCKA

much Luv son,respect


~Sin~
Scribe

__________________
Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece
in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war

overral rec-19-13-12-
aka R.I.S.E.

album done-One Vision
2nd album commin soon/

think spiritual,and the heaven will come
and with that said you can never lose/

the scribe

uppin for feedback

~sin~
Scribe

__________________
Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece
in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war

overral rec-19-13-12-
aka R.I.S.E.

album done-One Vision
2nd album commin soon/

think spiritual,and the heaven will come
and with that said you can never lose/

the scribe

stop sleepin,and drop feedback.

~Sin~
Scribe

__________________
Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece
in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war

overral rec-19-13-12-
aka R.I.S.E.

album done-One Vision
2nd album commin soon/

think spiritual,and the heaven will come
and with that said you can never lose/

the scribe

king of new york??? lmaoo chill dunny

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

act like you know B,


~Sin~
The Scribe

__________________
Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece
in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war

overral rec-19-13-12-
aka R.I.S.E.

album done-One Vision
2nd album commin soon/

think spiritual,and the heaven will come
and with that said you can never lose/

the scribe

I agree with djp, nice multis, and flow is solid and so is structure, even got some punches in there :P, i liked the verses targeting different things yet keepin to the structure and idea, nice style and good piece

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Turn off the news and read!

Open Mics

Stealth vs. Ass-as-Sin

thx for the respect,uppin for more feedback


~Sin!
Scribe

__________________
Im A Poet,my mind is my materpiece
in lyrical warfare i show mc's the art of war

overral rec-19-13-12-
aka R.I.S.E.

album done-One Vision
2nd album commin soon/

think spiritual,and the heaven will come
and with that said you can never lose/

the scribe