you really think you are that good do you? ever since you were born your mum wanna die too en talking bout you wanna be death, you ain't cool cause everyone wants be dead if thay ain't got no friends left I think your rap stinks myself but it's because it's as "original" as hell how many rappers now day talk about it? while if killers come too you you'll be scared and go shouting like "hell please don't kill me I'm just someone who's tryna be cool you feel me?" but for the rest your rap was okay but it's a pity that you just imitate okay? (don't think it's personnal, and I know the flow is bad, really bad, but I'm tired so whateva)