10-20 lines.
24 hour check.
1 hour drop.
Dont sway.

Good Luck.

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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 05:26 PM.

Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 05:41 PM.

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Voted For: Kordozar

ok this is a hard one to vote on:

Kordozar: beginning was kinda wack. and just when i was about to click X i saw acouple good lines. i was was feeling the style too much because of the child molester part. i think some of you good line could have been worded better. and i would have liked more mults and wordplays. i think that the best prat of your verse was personals and vocab.5/10
this line made me not click X:A Disgraced Kid,Onli Known Fa His Rv Money...
If I Left Him Feed,He Won't Eat Off Mih Verse Starvin Dumby..

verbal: when i first read your verse i was like "this the same dude i thought was raw?" yeah yeah you had a good mults, flow and style, but where were those famous lines? it kinda sounded like you wrote that on the shitter or someshit. not bad personnals though. idk what else i can say about your just that it not what i expected. 4/10
what i guess was the best line: kordozar's a joke, hes ducking like he had his scrotum in throat.
suicide's your alternative, i guess i'll just show em the ropes.

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Voted For: Kordozar

dam good battle but it woulda been betta if verbal's lines were longer, na mean?
punches- hah....K took it to u man
personals.........K had that too . all u was spittin was ur opinion basically
structure- purely to VA. his verse was way more easier to read. work on dat K
Multis'-....None of yall
oV/ K, because of his punches and personals

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Voted For: Kordozar

Verbal Abuse:
Good drop. Your structure was allright. Vocabulary was pretty solid. Some good punches, but I don't feel that you came as hard as Kordozar did in that area. Your flow was pretty dope aswell.

Overal : 6/10

Kordozar:
Yo, you had a good drop aswell. You came a bit harder than Verbal Abuse did, and that is why I am going to give you the win. Kordozar you had harder punches, and a better flow in my opinion. Work on your structure a bit and you'll be all good.

Overal: 7/10


Close battle, but Kordozar came a bit harder than Verbal Abuse...therefore...

v/Kordozar

Voted For: Kordozar

Kordozar- your verse was pretty nice...i enjoyed it...made me laugh at times...but anyways your punches i thought hit harder then verbal's but not much but they were harder and connected much better...Your structure was pretty good..easy to read...had some personals in there...But also you got this win for more lines then Verbal...

Verbal-your verse was nice also but punches didnt seem to hit harder...structure was good and easy to read...but you also had lesser lines then him...which is a big advantage for him so overall you did decent but Kordozar got this with punches...and more lines...

v/ Kordozar........

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Voted For: Kordozar

Verbal Abuse.................
kor's a leauge gimmie, not even a pre-limmer.
ya other battles like t-ball, theres not really a winner.
creative...ok opener...didnt really hit all that well...

its proven Kor, when you key...animocity scores.
cause monopoly's...the only time ya ruling the boards.
pretty good......hit decent

only fooling yourself, like a reprocution experiment.
different pills for each mood & ya swallowed 'embarrassment'.
creative....but still didnt hit real hard....decent bar

look at it from the poll point of view...its Kor verse veteran who?
text is cake, learn to quit when theres chicks better than you.
hit ok.....basic...but it worked

kordozar's a joke, hes ducking like he had his scrotum in throat.
suicide's your alternative, i guess i'll just show em the ropes.
1st line...played....2nd line...nice closer...hit good


Kordozar.............
I'll Hurt This Dude When Mih Verse Is Threw...
Talking About Killing Iss Tha Onli Way You'll Spit Verbal Abuse..
hmm ok opener......hit ok...nothin great

9th Degree Merked This Foo,Than He Hid His Rekord...
Everi Since Then He Losses Kept Jumpin Like A Move In Checkers...
lol nice personal...hit good...good bar

Kids A Predator,Lust On Pre Teens Since He Cant Get A Straight Chick...
Posted Tha Battle In Efl,But He Still Learning Tha Basics...
another nice bar....hit hard...

A Disgraced Kid,Onli Known Fa His Rv Money...
If I Left Him Feed,He Won't Eat Off Mih Verse Starvin Dumby..
hmm creative...but didnt hit all that well....

Ya Bars Stink Dunny,Everi Since You 1st Registerd..
Calls Out,Newbies Say Thea Pussies Makes Him A
Child Molester..
decent bar....nothin more nothin less

Disect Your Body And Leave Ya Brains On Clay...
Tha Same Old VA,Who Wasn't Elivated Sence He Came In May...
lol...good personal...hit hard....good bar

Ashamed And Gay,No Wonda His Strukture Iss Soft...
Loves His Sibling,Cus He's Used Ta Suckin His Balls..
nah...wasnt feelin it

Loving It Dawg,All Tha Attention And Fame...
Name Tha Top 10 Herbs,Watch They Mention His Name...
ok closer....hit decent...


overall i thought kordozar easily won this battle....his punches hit a lot harder...he had more personals...more multis........verbal got structure and vocab....but other than that...its all kor.....nice battle

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