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Old 01-13-05, 12:56 PM   #1
Young Phrophet
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No Beef just on my mind!

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Ok first time on this site and my impression of some of the lyrics on here are dope and some are wack as a mafucka! but oh what the hell but it's like this...I'm gonna spit off something quick no hate no beef cuz i don't know any of yall

Don't mean to freepost but this is just what's on my mind!

Who ever is the mods or whatever on here can say what they want about this but i'm speaking my mind so get at me!
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Old 01-13-05, 02:01 PM   #2
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where tha flow at cuz?
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Old 01-13-05, 02:02 PM   #3
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you gotta have a flow or somethin or one of da mods gone boot dis shit 4real...no disrespect of course...
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Old 01-13-05, 02:07 PM   #4
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You weak and unstable like bad picnic tables your legs
About to fall off your clout is all soft bitch should beg
Me not to rip him your script dim and lips trimmed
In chap stick look I rap sick and stay hipped above the rim
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Old 01-13-05, 02:33 PM   #5
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I take shots at any old fool//
even if that means in the middle of school//
here's a quick tip man, yeah use this tool//
just cuz ya freestyles good, don't make you cool//
as if you wanna take shots at a phrophet like me//
I'll still win in defeat cuz you despise me//
Now there ain't no reason to tell lies G//
Just to let you know nothing gets by me//
after i'm done ya girl will sing in high key/
and drink up my fluids as if it's Hi-C!//
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Old 01-13-05, 02:44 PM   #6
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damn...ripped his bitch ass...ay, return tha fava in my OM when you get tha chance (its in my sig)...and for dat keystyle i give a 7/10...quick and simple...~1~
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Old 01-13-05, 02:49 PM   #7
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idk what was attempted here. but heres my feedback: i needed links to keep my thread open, as well as you do, so get some links so they can see that i gave feedback to sustain my thread. thanks, elevate, and peace.

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Old 01-16-05, 12:54 AM   #8
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just elevat on ur vocab and strucutre and get rid of the bars I use to do that myself but it was ok and just work on ur lyrics also homes.
5/10 and check the free agent thread of urs homes.
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