1ST TO FIVE WINS
3-0=KO
NO CREW OR DICKRIDE VOTES
NO BITIN OR ANY OTHER FUNNY SHIT
10-12 BAR LIMIT...

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AIGHT HERE MY VERSE...I WOULDA POSTED EARLIER BUT MY COMPUTER CUZ FUCKIN UP.....

Ya punches wouldn't blow X,even if ya put ectasy in a whistle//
This cat is fake,look at his name,I bet the V.A stand for (V)ery (A)rtifical//
Ya fuckin faggot,you'll always see Steady aka V.a suckin on cocks//
U could be next to MJ while his head was on fire,but ya still won't be at the "hottest spots"//
Ya gave ya mom Mr.Hankey for X-mas,just so u can say,ya (w)-raps are the shit//
I'll fuckin put a muted TV in ya voice box,just so ya won't be a-loud to spit//(allowed)
You be thinking you an ill emcee but ya a bitch and ya rhymes is weak//
Like a homless person wearin a shirt wit stripes,ur muthafuckin lines is cheap//
Ya should be 'Mike Tyson downloadin AOL messenger',cuz dats the only time ya 'punches have AIM'//
Nigga wanted his thoughts red(read),so he asked me to pour Hawaiian punch onto his brain//......MUTHAFUCKA....!!!!!

UPPIN FOR YA VERSE....1

even if u was struck by lightning ya flowz still couldn't electricfy tha crowd/
i bet your demo to record company's get more no no's then destiny child/
you couldn't spit sick even if u had hiv's from your mouth/
i bet u got cancer from second degree use of lyrics u inhaled now spitten out/
im un expected to win while x-pected out/(get it?)
while your dick is up N cumming(comin)in your boyfreinds mouth/
basicly this battles uneven like holyifields ear cuz it's in tysons mouth/
you've prolly switched yo styles about 6 time's basicly u fouled out/
this is a ol time as whoopin...i'm bringin tha paddle out/
ya thoughts are homeless cuz i lyricly ripped ya brain out/

on verse 5 i ment to say whil "I" x-pected out....uppin tho

AIGHT UPPIN FOR THEM VOTES PEOPLE....

vote: un-xpected

Flow: V.A
Punches: U.X
Multis: =
Rhymin: U.X

OVERALL:
V.A:6.4
U.X:7.5

DO me a favor man pls vote on ma first battle!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=17907

peace

AIGHT 1-0 ME STILL UPPIN.......

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good battle, very even, UNTill, V.A said "this is a ol time as whoopin...i'm bringin tha paddle out/
ya thoughts are homeless cuz i lyricly ripped ya brain out/"

dam dog that aint even ryme...if you would have left that out u might have takin this,cuz I was feelin ya verse foreal,

vote=U-X

AIGHT 2-0 ME STILL UPPIN...

HOLLA

I'M GONNA HAVE TO GIVE DIS ONE TO UN-XPECTED, THE REASON IS THAT UN HAD A BETTER FLOW AND VA'S LAST BARS DIDN'T RHYME AT ALL SO THATS DA EXPLINATION.
VOTE=UN-XPECTED
HOLLA 1