GIVE ME FEEDBACK I DONT KNOW WHAT IM DOING????

this is WAY better opn mic

put this in uptempo



Now heres where we get crude and lewd, going for sailor rude
about the bitches ive shrewed to screw
more than a few harpooned at the saloon
humping like a mad baboon outside taiwanese ruins

enveloped in weed smoke, maybe later, some blow to wallow
im no raper bloke, have some trust lets go,
shut the door, did you say you like to swallow?
pour us some rum and coke, lets sit back and mellow
lay on some music low , nice 'n' slow
maybe even listen to some simple chello
guess you didnt feel it coming, hello
couldnt hold, blow my load, sorry bitch facial
haha dumb twit, up your nose like nasal
were more than just off the wall

but what? oh what? butt fuck, uh oh! a fat slut what?
giver her a litre of peanut butter, feel her getting wetter
yum, yum know you've got her going
a shudder and a sputter, rumble now youre not toyin
neighborhood wondering, if they're hearing thunderin
oh, shit stuck unser this smelly ho's blubber
wonderin why im such a big bitch lover

its not ony fat ho's toes im makin curl
when my toung is swirling O's makin you moan at will
as an oyster to pearls im lovin them slim girls
no artificial player, better liked than most hundred doller vibrators
true, im a heart breaker, too bad whore accept it im a hater
never been known as a masterbater
always havin over hormonial teenagers beepin my pager
o.k. wait set up a date. see ya soon, fuck ya later

fucked up life, dont need a wife, stress, nevermind the strife
you shoot off at the cuff, oops slice, then poof!
some little bitty genie, made your weenie stumpy,teeny tiny
too bad wasnt a bottled sheik playin sweet between the sheets
shoulda signed a pre-'nup agreement
maybe coulda helped save some of your penis

you say were supposed to believe this b.s.?
well i guess yes all women are born demons
fucked up from the start, right in the fetus
y'all want to be worshipped like jesus
in a power trip cause you all know how to please us
excuse me miss, just one squirt ky grease
slip it in your anus, figure that one out, aint no rhebus

since i cant really beat them, might as well hurt their feelins
all got too much seimen in 'em, shorting out their equilibrium
you've sucked back enough loads through your blow hole
to fill up mutliple sea world aquariums
and you wonder why i avoid you like open uranium?
toxic pussey, crustie undies cause you never changin 'em
eating through rubbers like friends of jeffry dahlmer
smell so bad, wilt a field of geraniums
would'nt shower after gangbanging a whole stadium

lollipop, lickin dick, sucky sucky, slop
dried up by another cum mop, roll over flop
thanks again, i'll call when i need a friend
beautiful head, i'm off to bed




























*dahlmer put his victims in acid

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