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Old 01-08-05, 06:06 PM   #1
Da Future
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Freestyle.Rate It.1-10

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People try to talk shit and play around cause i'm young/
if these pussy niggaz keep talking i'll put some shells in there toung/
then i'll slice ya neck and slick ya lungs/
if u dont like me then stay away/
and if i got a probelm with M-Block u gonna die today/
u bitch ass nigga better be listening to what i say/
i'm straight outta brooklyn killing u fagets/
nah i'm destroying all of u annoying magets/
if u got a gun and u want me dead u better blast it/
cause once i pop off ya head would be gone/
u wanna start a war then let's get it on/
no disrespect to the game but i could spit more that 200 bars/
i could steal more than 100 cars/
i never weant to jail but i might go some time in my life/
cause i had nightmares that i be stabbing people up with a knife/
i really wonder how it feels taking away someone's life/
i dont care cause u do something to me then i will strike/
hit you in ya back with my metal pipe/
i could fight like a man without a weapon/
fighting me is some shit that some of these niggaz is regreting/
my rhymes is so hot i'll make everyone in alaska start sweating/
my niggaz is so crazy that they would kill everyone in ya wedding/

What Up My Niggaz.Just Rate This Shit.
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Old 01-08-05, 06:13 PM   #2
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yo that was some good shit keep droppin dem bombs and da more u do the more u'll improve with wordplay and vocab. i'd give that probobally 7.5/10 cuz it wasn't the best but pretty good for a newbie especially one as new as u
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Old 01-08-05, 06:15 PM   #3
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theres no need to say your freestyleing cuz its impossible when you do text...its called key style and yet you have to fix something cuz you type to fast...plus its nothing great forced lines and io just dont like it..3/10
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Old 01-08-05, 06:17 PM   #4
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Thanx.More Feedback.
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