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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-09-05 at 05:04 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 02:05 PM.

Butters has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 02:08 PM.

look at my rapperz name double barrel u get hit wit just two shots
theres a lotta ill rappers on this site u not
yea i remeber that dude butters hes from that south park movie
get ya ass to another site cuz rapverse aint for newbies
allow me to call u lonely aint nobody got ya back
ull get wraped,smacked ,tapped then thrown in some crap
a lotta niggas dont noe me here let me introduce my self
maybe after this battle, ull take my advice and get some help
ill be dammed if i let this rookie take it from me
ill loan u 20$ so u can get raping for dummies

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Voted For: Butters

butters won dis match. he had the way better punches, he killed u wit the personals. golden ur flow was way off man. butters was on point wit his punches and metas.
v/butters

butters took dis..that beat around tha bush line made me laugh man..im 2 tired 2 do a full explanation..sorry.. to butters

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Voted For: Butters

Golden shellz

look at my rapperz name double barrel u get hit wit just two shots
theres a lotta ill rappers on this site u not
^nope...weak opener

yea i remeber that dude butters hes from that south park movie
get ya ass to another site cuz rapverse aint for newbies
^first line okay,second nah

allow me to call u lonely aint nobody got ya back
ull get wraped,smacked ,tapped then thrown in some crap
^not feeling it

a lotta niggas dont noe me here let me introduce my self
maybe after this battle, ull take my advice and get some help
^doesn't do the trick

ill be dammed if i let this rookie take it from me
ill loan u 20$ so u can get raping for dummies
^okay closer

Overall bit weak drop, vocab,flow and structure were okay but as far as i can see, you didn't have any hardhitting punch or personal in there...Try to bring the other cat down as much as possible with original punches and not that same old played bullshit...


Butters

I'll shove the double barrel up your ass, cos i heard you like cock's.
Spreading the sickness B? only cos your square as a fucking box.
^okay opener

I don't need to diss you, all i need is to just randomly tap the key's.
Golden's gay. cos it's inevitable, he play's with the ball's of De-feet.*
^nice nice

Ripping me? no way, i'll hit ya have ya shell spun, like the Turtle's.
But your just handicapped in this battle, like leg amputee's doin' hurdle's.
^quite good, no punch though

Douse you in pity, cos i mean everyone say's ya gfx are wack.
Cos u don't "beat around the bush", you go ahead & munch the ball-sack.
^feeling it

Herb's possess rapperz, which you are just a typical example.
Kid's dumb cos he thought you had to pay for a free sample.
^good closer

Solid drop: you had structure,flow and vocab on lock and your punches and personals weren't mad played, you had some nice wordplay in there too. Enjoyed reading your verse...

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oh shit, iight w/e uppin this battle~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Voted For: Butters

butters got this better flow and punches and personals yet his structures fucked u can work on that u need to try to make more sence too good work butters C-

Golden u need to improve streched lines and allover the place structure thats only beacause of the strechd lines so u can work on that punches fell very week not much personals D-

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Upping....Golden got whored, i want my win. fucking 50 characters.

Golden=Whored.......now i want my first win...upping for votes.

Voted For: Butters

butters, all i gotsta say is punches, u aint hafta knock him out

Yea i vote 4 my nigga butters cuz he had tha punches on lock, i like his structure, its not lioke all the others
but golden u had som good lines too and flow

but yea tha vote goes to''BUTTERS''

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