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Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 02:02 AM.

Flamin Barz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 02:45 AM.

This nigga must be a mirror the way he fuckin copy's my style
groupie hoe knows, so he puts in'a "Flamin" like he's been wylde
Idenity Theft? nigga you were never a super dooper
all you droppin is shit, seizure patient holdin a pooper scooper
Another battle? say the third time's a charm but i aint harmed
I mean when elton john see's you, it's settin off his gay alarm
Want fame? as you go up hope's creek, aint got ya paddle wet
claim that i stack losses, when you aint even won a battle yet...lol
This bitch is LIT, burnin his ass like dry leaves
Fuckin misperceived, like the life-span of christopher-reeves
Im out-lappin you the fastest, you movin slow like chilled molasses
Flow's lame, cant get the picture, so u leave nerds without dey glasses
Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair
You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair
Got more fingers on one hand, than you do in ya whole battle-log
Simply no potential, like a gun-shy hunting dog
Take a good look at this vet...i been set, check to da left im from "da bricks"
C'mon i don like clits but anyday I'll eat this prick!

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i'll peel ya top - without givin a fuck if you're even ill or not-
ur like a hotel in vegas-n your crews only there to fill the slots-
you cant even tie the knot - how the hell you plan on winnin-
n can ur crew roll any deeper - I thought 6 feet was federal limit-
ur just full of wackness - n you'll die thinkin i wouldnt blast the tech-
u could be a doctor to animals - n still wouldnt have the status of a vet-
fuck u and your threats - man nothings changed since ur back-
infact - i actually covered my fuckin eyes n still saw u were wack-
what round is it? - i think its time for me to ground this bitch-
almost got my dik hard cuz u smell like mo pussy than a pound of fish-
i jus wanted to bury you 6 feet - but you're penetratin too far-
shoulda stayed 'reppin alcatraz' cuz you aint never 'escapin my bars'-
heres some an advice - use ya mouse to click the elevation thread-
cause i spit lyrical leprosy - leave you with black dots like raisin bread-

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Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

Voted For: Flamin Barz

this was a close battle but i give it to flamin
Opener-Notorious
Flow- Flamin
Structure-Flamin
Multis- Notorious
Punches- Flamin
Personals- Flamin
Like i said pretty close but flamin u pulled it off good

^^^Thas a dope ass line

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hmmm.......uppin fo mo votes. yo son i don understand how flamin got personals, because he coulda took dat ryhme off anotha site. cuz he didnt adress my name once, but wat eva!
uppin ^^^^

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just wanted to see da polls............................

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Notorious Verses - Good spit, it flowed well and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair
You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair

Worst Line - Got more fingers on one hand, than you do in ya whole battle-log
Simply no potential, like a gun-shy hunting dog

Flamin Barz - Iight spit, your flow was not to bad, and you had good multi's and some decent punches.


Best Line - ur just full of wackness - n you'll die thinkin i wouldnt blast the tech-
u could be a doctor to animals - n still wouldnt have the status of a vet-

Worst Line - you cant even tie the knot - how the hell you plan on winnin-
n can ur crew roll any deeper - I thought 6 feet was federal limit-

OVERALL - Good battle here, both flowed well and brought hard punches. I think NV won this battle though. His punches were harder and his flow was better. Barz, just throw harder punches next time and maybe personals.

Vote - Notorious Verses

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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

yo ummm......uppin dis battle^^^^^^^
1-1 tie, break it!

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uppin............................................. ...

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..The Establishment..

Battles
Flamin Barz vs Scene0-0..need votes
Armada Da 1287 vs Flamin Barz0-1...i'm up


Open Mics
Sanity Lost
Twizted Government Diss

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Good Battle Pretty Hard Decision But Hea It Is..
Openor=Tie,Both Ok Punch But Flamin's Line Had Self Glory
Strukture=Tie,Both Easy Ta Read
Punches=Nv,His Hit Harder And They Got Strait Ta Tha Point
Multis=None
Vokab=None Up Ya Vokab
Wordplay=Flamin,His Words Went With Everi Thing In His Bar
Personals=None Up Yall Personals
Closer=Tie Both Ended Tha Verse Good.......

Iight Nv Took This Cus Of His Punches His Punches Wass Harder And They Wass Strait Foward..He 1 This Onli Cus Of His Punches

/V Notorious Verses..................

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Voted For: Flamin Barz

Flamin Barz
i'll peel ya top - without givin a fuck if you're even ill or not-
ur like a hotel in vegas-n your crews only there to fill the slots-
nice opener
you cant even tie the knot - how the hell you plan on winnin-
n can ur crew roll any deeper - I thought 6 feet was federal limit-
this was aight
ur just full of wackness - n you'll die thinkin i wouldnt blast the tech-
u could be a doctor to animals - n still wouldnt have the status of a vet-
coo
fuck u and your threats - man nothings changed since ur back-
infact - i actually covered my fuckin eyes n still saw u were wack-
lol....kinda funny but this was coo
what round is it? - i think its time for me to ground this bitch-
almost got my dik hard cuz u smell like mo pussy than a pound of fish-
lol...nice
i jus wanted to bury you 6 feet - but you're penetratin too far-
shoulda stayed 'reppin alcatraz' cuz you aint never 'escapin my bars'-
kinda played
heres some an advice - use ya mouse to click the elevation thread-
cause i spit lyrical leprosy - leave you with black dots like raisin bread-
coo closer

8.0/10...you had a coo verse cuz...some coo punches in there...flow was coo too...your multies was aight but i think u need to work on them a little more

Notorious Verses
This nigga must be a mirror the way he fuckin copy's my style
groupie hoe knows, so he puts in'a "Flamin" like he's been wylde
aight
Idenity Theft? nigga you were never a super dooper
all you droppin is shit, seizure patient holdin a pooper scooper
lol...coo
Another battle? say the third time's a charm but i aint harmed
I mean when elton john see's you, it's settin off his gay alarm
this was coo
Want fame? as you go up hope's creek, aint got ya paddle wet
claim that i stack losses, when you aint even won a battle yet...lol
lol...nice
This bitch is LIT, burnin his ass like dry leaves
Fuckin misperceived, like the life-span of christopher-reeves
coo
Im out-lappin you the fastest, you movin slow like chilled molasses
Flow's lame, cant get the picture, so u leave nerds without dey glasses
this was coo
Only thing Flamin, is the permanent press in ur computer chair
You do this for the "experience", still waiting to sprout a pubic hair
lol...funny and nice
Got more fingers on one hand, than you do in ya whole battle-log
Simply no potential, like a gun-shy hunting dog
this was a good punch but the flow was kinda off
Take a good look at this vet...i been set, check to da left im from "da bricks"
C'mon i don like clits but anyday I'll eat this prick!
this wasnt too good of a closer and the 1st line was kinda stretched

7.5/10...you had a pretty good verse too...some pretty good punches...but in some areas...the flow was off and a couple of lines were streched

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Net Record(56-9)

RV Record(13-3)

Overall Record
69-12

uppin da dam battle, come on people lets vote herrrrrr

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