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Old 12-06-04, 04:32 PM   #1
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I'm not done rapping..I'm at it till it happens
till its mastered..then it won't matter.....................

I aint done..I'ma finish my dollar..........
gime one quartor..then I won't bother...still it aint ova..........


Let me use this song..to spit a couple punchlines
show my skill off..be a battle rapper.. one time
I' will reveal the true me..if I change my style it aint new me
I'ma try a multiple tuxedo's to see what suit me..
get at me for a listen..don't be mad if you were dissin
and I just happen to hear it..was it magic or is it?
just imiagin if I have risin..the maggots've bitin after my visit
If sickness deminished in the one who's way to timid
its me today..call me what you want..Indeph B.L.A.,
ProVerse or 708..I been around..I'm not just a net face
I don't only make rap and poems..I do it in the best way
see what the best say..they say I'm second to him
I swear why do you call me cocky..I'm only expecting to win..
hell Naw I aint finished..I wanna be progressing my cents..

I'm not done rapping..I'm at it till it happens
till its mastered..then it won't matter.....................

I aint done..I'ma finish my dollar..........
gime one quartor..then I won't bother....still it aint ova.........



Why would I stand a chill..when I can demand a deal
I try to make it personal..and something the fans'll feel
someday..it'll be one thing..and all in the same roll
I'ma kill twin eagles..knockin em with the same stone
I'll admit..I aint grown..but my thrown..is still safe though
I'ma keep rolling..like tires giving by maaco..please say no
when I ask in the past..did I ever relax..presious time wasted
man do I hate it..why am I just start rappin..god damn I'm dated
I shoulded changed detergent..If I'm faded..will I make it
there's a no brainer..just lose your head..eliminate your favorite
my albums better stay locked in plastic with no trading..
not even on E-Bay..I'm a scan tron test and not one
you can re-take...

I'm not done rapping..I'm at it till it happens
till its mastered..then it won't matter.....................

I aint done..I'ma finish my dollar..........
gime one quartor..then I won't bother.....stil it aint ova........


\Bridge/
Can I get some Props..Can I get Some Props..
Can I get some Props..Or I'ma pick the Lock..
Can I get some Props..Can I get some props..
Can I get some props..because I fit the top..


Single Tracks even that..the gap..attack the tracks
kill the mic..crowns I'ma steal tonight..up in the trap
like the rap game's neck..I'm still here and the same threat
you better hurry..how you gonna call me with no name yet
be real..If I don't see you..I won't believe you are you
why would I justify..if you are just a fool..you must be rude
do I have to act crazy..and be like busta dude..no to you
I thin kyou know th dude..recognise when I'm spotted..
or get clapped like a Nolia dude..I said That I don't use guns
I'm more original then..Watch me think of some New puns..

I'm not done rapping..I'm at it till it happens
till its mastered..then it won't matter.....................

I aint done..I'ma finish my dollar..........
gime one quartor..then I won't bother.....still it aint ova........


-deph

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Old 12-06-04, 04:43 PM   #2
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Old 12-06-04, 05:02 PM   #3
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Old 12-06-04, 05:10 PM   #4
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hmm 2 open mics today this cats on track...could find time to anything else but spit this dope shit in a pile of lines...weerd..<rhymes...HA...well anyway this was another dope key from you...feelin this madly........9.2/10...a lil better than the other one but not by far...weerd
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Old 12-06-04, 05:16 PM   #5
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nice drop man...was feelin:

Single Tracks even that..the gap..attack the tracks
kill the mic..crowns I'ma steal tonight..up in the trap
like the rap game's neck..I'm still here and the same threat
you better hurry..how you gonna call me with no name yet

and:

or get clapped like a Nolia dude..I said That I don't use guns
I'm more original then..Watch me think of some New puns..

both had sik flow, origniality and vocab worked

overall spit - 8.9/10
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Old 12-06-04, 05:17 PM   #6
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really feelin this.....keep them coming....8.9/10

drop some feedback on my first open mic....links in the sig....pz
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Old 12-06-04, 11:38 PM   #7
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yeah bro that was it. i was feelin u here. dopeness in the chorus and through all the verses. what can i say? near perfect but dont stop there bro keep em coming. 9/10

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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…

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Old 12-06-04, 11:42 PM   #8
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No Words To Put It..........................dope.................. .......chea
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Old 12-06-04, 11:49 PM   #9
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^___________^ heh. yep thats it. uppin this for Indeph.
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Old 12-07-04, 01:21 PM   #10
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Old 12-07-04, 02:20 PM   #11
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