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01-14-05, 11:22 PM
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*~Time~*
IP: 408D D2A2
Jus a lil somthin  The times we spent laughin While the minutes continue passin The time conversatin on the phone Brings to mind that I wish I wasn't alone Grown so attached, so quickly and fast With passed time, its the longer we last The stronger we grasped our emotions Brings notions of this lasting, im hoping And Im boasting because of you girl Brought the romance and trust... ........................back into my world Which had been swirling down so quick Admit that the time we first kissed It was bliss, and even since the start I knew that in due time, you'd have... ......................a place in my heart
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01-15-05, 10:36 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 46C2 FF91
It's a nice short drop, could relate to everything in it (if you replace girl with boy that is
 )...Nothing too special cause things like these have been done before but it's something personal probably...Love these lil drops that come straight from heart...Keep on doing your thing!DQ
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01-15-05, 02:23 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
thanks ma........appreciate the feed and yeah this was strait from the heart...all my poetry comes from it.......you got anything else you need fed on......drop a link...ill return the feed....
uppin for more feed on this....
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01-15-05, 11:01 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
uppity up up up
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01-17-05, 02:21 AM
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IP: 3D13 9FAC
short... but aight, i liked the content, some iamgery and it contained a flow, might be short as fuck but it was good for what it was none the less, neway maybe write some more to this an make it a peice.... neway keep droppin str8 heat...
Peace...
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01-17-05, 12:34 PM
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IP: 408D D2A2
thanks man......appreciate the feed.......ive been more inclined to write lately.......and obviously the message is in this poem..........
uppin for more feed
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