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Old 01-13-05, 01:35 AM   #1
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Diss to C.A.L.I.

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Diss to C.A.L.I. (empire):

just saying what everyone else wants to...

lug nuts in his shoes, you dont weigh in like wrestling cues.
after reviewing ya W's...& ya 11th membership to a crew
i conclude your RV's most denounced dude. too coward to lie.
as hood as you get, stops at cutting the brows of ya eyes.
empire retired twice in one month, thats a record itself.
engineering mad beef with the council & once paid for its help.
dun, i created ya belt. think about all those AIM convos.
whats embarassing, is ya baby's mama comes from the congo.
your just another one of those...confused with his color.
ya white...end of story, like a jaubernaut under-covers.
dont forget to use rubber, none want empire to descend.
truth is...the I-net dislikes you. while suicide is your friend.
now dont kill yourself just becuase i wanted it first.
do it for all those whom youve fronted youve merked.
theres a list, in which my name is nowhere to be found.
cause like the current Ali, rooks would kill this vet in a round.
you can tell your not favored, like your perfomance in bed.
cause getting off, is the only way you cum first...while head to head.



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Old 01-13-05, 01:41 AM   #2
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ok ok, dis was mediocre at best, i guess its iight but be on da lookput for a response, jus sayin

6/10
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Old 01-13-05, 02:42 AM   #3
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^^someones on cali's nuts lmao this was not mediocre at best.. you are mediocre at best this was hott... do you see the wordplay and the multies the personals... VA this was dope.. good punches dope flow.. consistent verse.. good structure..

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9/10

dope piece

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Old 01-13-05, 01:20 PM   #4
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thanks flow, much appreciated.
im sure empire will respond, no doubt...i knew
this when i started, its exactly what i want.
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Old 01-13-05, 01:21 PM   #5
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lug nuts in his shoes, you dont weigh in like wrestling cues.
after reviewing ya W's...& ya 11th membership to a crew
^^^DATZ REALLY TRUE FAM LOL

empire retired twice in one month, thats a record itself.
engineering mad beef with the council & once paid for its help.
^^NUFF SAID........

overall ya verse was hott.....nice punches and some true shit..WUN
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Old 01-13-05, 01:23 PM   #6
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hot as a bitch lol i like this nice punches and personals
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Old 01-13-05, 02:03 PM   #7
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HOT AND SEXY

MADD is I rude? No glad you're nude // food for thought
Grab a plate have some chocolate cake // bake it like Betty
Crocker MADD is you ready with the big ****er? // Drop
Her right inside my juicy coo-chee when I spread my leg //
Wedge the lips of my thing open oh MADD it's smoking I
Ain’t joking // hoping you go so deep in it sweet, oh honey it
Itch like a bewitch // switch places, stitch laces in my
Panties for the wetness // sweatiness oh my body wet down
There like a lake MADD I guess you're going to get cake yeah
Sweetie I want your body // knotty sweet hairs I wanna blow
Hottie airs through them // stem so much heat and such deep
With your tongue I know you're sprung I'm going to give you
Some // cum a river while hum and moan, shiver on the sheet
// Sweet don't know what to do with your brown body it's so hot, tongue
Party in your G spot makes you whistle recoiling and boiling like
A teapot // hot a lot down there MADD I took off my dress,
Shook fondling my nipple breast girl you got a tasty looking
*** like Tracey dash you got to be clueless on how I'm going to
Do this // kiss your big brown thighs while going down to tongue
Your pies // tries to make the hairs around your thing fries sing
Sweet lies in your ear but don’t fear // hear me? Oh MADD I want
The actions like Toni Braxton just be a man about it make my body
Stay for Dre day ironic when we smoke chronic Wet like Janet
Jackson and Buster Rhymes // understand lackluster Climbs
Bedpost when bump and grind head bang while bedsprings
Shake like jelly when kissing // listening to R. Kelly got funk sex
On my mind girl I wanna like taste you and lace you with tongue
You got me sprung
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Old 01-13-05, 02:35 PM   #8
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what did that have to do with empire? if your gonna drop a verse, at least collaberate it with the topic. shit.
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madd youre so wack lol
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Old 01-13-05, 02:36 PM   #10
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V.A. dispite your looks...
You must drop a link to an Open Mic you posted Decent feed on or this will be closed.
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Old 01-13-05, 02:43 PM   #11
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lol, ok. gimmie a minute.

link one: young prophet.

link two: Indeph.
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Old 01-13-05, 04:42 PM   #12
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uppin for more feedback or some collbaterates.
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Old 01-13-05, 08:19 PM   #13
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again, waiting for cali to get the fuck in here.
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Old 01-13-05, 08:38 PM   #14
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LoL when he comes in he's going to spaz to fuck. Like he always does, ALJSLFDJDSFJSFJ. *no hate cali* LoL.

It was an overall verse, and I didn't think it was that mediocre.

Best Line:
dont forget to use rubber, none want empire to descend.
truth is...the I-net dislikes you. while suicide is your friend.

dope. LoL.

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Old 01-14-05, 12:39 PM   #15
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thanks for the feedback yall. much appreciated.
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