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Old 01-15-05, 06:01 PM   #1
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poetry help

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wassup homies you problebly know me I haven't been on rap battles for ages... I just wanted a little bit of advice and a little lesson in rapping im takin my rap really serously now cause ive been doin it now for a year and just wanna get better at what I do.... Just wanted to know does it make a difference if you rhyme in assonance all the time or do you have to perfect rhyme mostly in freestyles? Example erm bablin javlin darfader saver little middle time line mind high I just need a little help out on my poetry peace.... Haters you can get fucked!
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Old 01-15-05, 06:03 PM   #2
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Aren't you sinner? OMFG

Just go ask somewhere else and stop cluttering up LL with poo poo topics.
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Old 01-15-05, 06:08 PM   #3
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sinner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-15-05, 06:17 PM   #4
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...............................fucka sinner beotch!:+)
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you serously need some help people one day your all gonna get fucked up... Bitches
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^i doubt ill get fucked up and since im the best poet on rv i say you get no help so die loser
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Old 01-15-05, 06:52 PM   #7
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you serously need some help people one day your all gonna get fucked up... Bitches


of course we'll get fucked!
We don't wanna be virgins
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