reminder of the rules:


16-24 lines
first to 5 votes wins
no stupid stuff (no dickriding, no hate votes, no crew votes)

post ASAP, i hate to keep uppin threads.

i'll drop my verse now.....


first off, battling me is dead wrong like chris wallace and eminem/
i'll block your punches like martial artists, you defenseless like armless men/
you tryin'a mix PHD with PMS and be a smart bitch/
i'm heart-less, putting concrete in your rhymes couldnt make a hard-diss/
you backward like criss-cross clothes, like pamela a, a silly ho/
bet your real skills only stack up in the art of blow/
you little bow-wow, get stepped on like ants/
i post battle verses, you just post rants/
fuck a multi, or imagery or a well-written diss/
i'll take this battle shit back to basic and just beat you with sticks/
you misguided like nellys collaberation with n-sync/
one line you drop got more holes than fences thats chain-link/
fuck it, your masocistic, i'll let you get you like pink/
got permanent writers block like air-blonde who cant think/
you so etheral, you aint even got presense of mind/
retarded, need ghost-writers when dropping a text-rhyme/


done.

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You could be a JEWEL THIEF and still could'nt drop GEMS ~~ You could'nt Grasp A W if you was a DYLEXIC making M&M's ~~

A rapoligist, this Battle I got this~~ You'll get Molested Verbaly faster than Girls who HMO pick R-KELLY as their GYNECOLOGIST~~ I rip thru weak Mcees and murder the average~~ My rhymes Kills you quicker than a 1st MONTH MISCARRIAGE~~

Bury Johnny 6ft Deep so let the Casket FALL~~ Cause you entered this battle knowing you did'nt HAVE THE BALLS LIKE LESBIAN SHOWER STALLS ~~

Your rhymes
TRASH like CRUSH CANS ~~ you're PUNCHES are like CIGARETTES TIPS on the EARTH SUFACE they do everything BUT{t} LAND ~~ I kick rappers like you in tha azz till ya RECTUM DESTROYED ~~ AND THE TONGUE on my Reeboks TASTE YA HEMROIDS ~~ You could'nt spit HOT with a Mouth Full of HELIUM~~ Labeling you with the STYLE of a MIME cause nobody's FEELIN EM~~

.....I'M OUT!!

me vs the m&m crew..

dyslexic crew? even worse symptoms are down to up. steal themselves, only time they SNATCHIN' W's.

and just to make fun of you real quick..

cixelsyd si siht.. not up to down.. fucking
idiot.

FUCK YOU TALKIN BOUT!

adapt...Its not werd for werd...its not like thats a very poriginal concept...it would be very very easy to put up a line like that wihtout ever seeing the other one..and she registered this month so she hasnt seen many battles anyway...why are you closing every thread like this...lol...

ADAPTS ON THE WARPATH!!!!

oh i was just showing similarities..
not saying she bit. although my bar
was pretty personal at the time.

but if she didnt even understand what
i said in dyslexic.. then she had to have
bitten that from someone.. considering
she was completly confused. blah but
whos accusing? im just noting clones.

thats a bunch of freeposts right there, isnt there an open mic rule clearly stated in the sticky threads that you are supposed to post your verses straight without any weird colours, caps locks, or font changes, etc?

whatever, on with the voting.

ya dam right i ain't bit shit!! wheres tha votes!! and adapt cut that gay shyt out !!

^^^^^^Yep, that shit is against the rules...you better edit it quick or take a "L"....

damn ya kats on this site
lol how gay can you get
not one person voted in like 10 posts

well let me help ya'll out

first off, battling me is dead wrong like chris wallace and eminem/
i'll block your punches like martial artists, you defenseless like armless men

first line was kinda played but decent finisher

you tryin'a mix PHD with PMS and be a smart bitch/
i'm heart-less, putting concrete in your rhymes couldnt make a hard-diss
{ight punch}

bet your real skills only stack up in the art of blow/
{nice personal actually got a chuckle outta me}

you misguided like nellys collaberation with n-sync/
one line you drop got more holes than fences thats chain-link
{would of been hot but too muh filler}

got permanent writers block like air-blonde who cant think
{would of been a nice personal but worded wrong

you so etheral, you aint even got presense of mind/
retarded, need ghost-writers when dropping a text-rhyme
{decent finisher}


Tonya's verse
You could be a JEWEL THIEF and still could'nt drop GEMS ~~ You could'nt Grasp A W if you was a DYLEXIC making M&M's ~~

{decent opener but nice punch}

A rapoligist, this Battle I got this~~ You'll get Molested Verbaly faster than Girls who HMO pick R-KELLY as their GYNECOLOGIST~~ I rip thru weak Mcees and murder the average~~ My rhymes Kills you quicker than a 1st MONTH MISCARRIAGE~~
{too much filler break this down a lil and it would be destructive}

Bury Johnny 6ft Deep so let the Casket FALL~~ Cause you entered this battle knowing you did'nt HAVE THE BALLS LIKE LESBIAN SHOWER STALLS ~~

{made me chuckle nice personal}

TRASH like CRUSH CANS ~~ you're PUNCHES are like CIGARETTES TIPS on the EARTH SUFACE they do everything BUT{t} LAND

{lol this one made me laugh good shit}

You could'nt spit HOT with a Mouth Full of HELIUM~~ Labeling you with the STYLE of a MIME cause nobody's FEELIN EM~~
{ nice ender}


shit my vote goes to
Tonya Montana
the punches were givin much thought
shit was well written
good shit shorty

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G.I. JOE

what he said..lol dude pretty much broke it down the way i would have. you both came wit tight verses but montana came wit tighter punches and wordplay

Johnny 6

first off, battling me is dead wrong like chris wallace and eminem/
i'll block your punches like martial artists, you defenseless like armless men/
Eh.. kind of a weak starter.. and playd badly
you tryin'a mix PHD with PMS and be a smart bitch/
i'm heart-less, putting concrete in your rhymes couldnt make a hard-diss/
decent...
you backward like criss-cross clothes, like pamela a, a silly ho/
bet your real skills only stack up in the art of blow/
ok build up... But you tryd to force it to much.. ruind the punch
you little bow-wow, get stepped on like ants/
i post battle verses, you just post rants/
more of a filler
fuck a multi, or imagery or a well-written diss/
i'll take this battle shit back to basic and just beat you with sticks/
ok
you misguided like nellys collaberation with n-sync/
one line you drop got more holes than fences thats chain-link/
not bad
fuck it, your masocistic, i'll let you get you like pink/
got permanent writers block like air-blonde who cant think/
weak
you so etheral, you aint even got presense of mind/
retarded, need ghost-writers when dropping a text-rhyme/
Ghost writer part is byound playd

Over all ya verse was likea 5 or a 6..
Rhyme scheme needs alot of work, metaphors are ok for now.. best thing you have going but alot of playd ones..
Vocabs mediocre, mutlis eh..... Punchs need a lil more work.. Try for harder personals might help..

Tonya Montana

You could be a JEWEL THIEF and still could'nt drop GEMS ~~ You could'nt Grasp A W if you was a DYLEXIC making M&M's ~~
ok starter..A lil playd but good..(playd part is the M&M line, rest is chill
A rapoligist, this Battle I got this~~ You'll get Molested Verbaly faster than Girls who HMO pick R-KELLY as their GYNECOLOGIST~~ I rip thru weak Mcees and murder the average~~ My rhymes Kills you quicker than a 1st MONTH MISCARRIAGE~~
good bars.. nice punch in um, but there to long, shorten your bars some and reword it..
Bury Johnny 6ft Deep so let the Casket FALL~~ Cause you entered this battle knowing you did'nt HAVE THE BALLS LIKE LESBIAN SHOWER STALLS ~~
ok line.. not that hard tho
Your rhymes
TRASH like CRUSH CANS ~~ you're PUNCHES are like CIGARETTES TIPS on the EARTH SUFACE they do everything BUT{t} LAND ~~
good line
I kick rappers like you in tha azz till ya RECTUM DESTROYED ~~ AND THE TONGUE on my Reeboks TASTE YA HEMROIDS ~~ You could'nt spit HOT with a Mouth Full of HELIUM~~ Labeling you with the STYLE of a MIME cause nobody's FEELIN EM~~
very last lines a lil playd... Rest isnt bad, just doesnt flow that well

Over all ya verse would be like a 7.3/7.5 metaphors are good.. Nice punchs, but your flow kills ya verse.. Its WAY off, an needs help.. Vocab aint bad, multis coulda been better..

Vote= Tonya Montana

over all she came harder with Punchs