NuclearConcepts

..blah.. straight key..

Eatin pussies.. i'm rippin this cat.. put a slit in his back..
Got you scared logging on the internet so just stick to the fax...(facts)
With viscious attacks.. i'm rockin tha rural.. and fockin ya girl..
Standing on a globe wont help your chances of toppin the world..
I hollow your bones with dynamite words.. and i throw em in bunches..
Toss boxing gloves in a hampster ball and you still couldnt roll with the punches..
Strangle hollow with thick laced ladders.. beat him til his face spladders...
Got rhymes that turn ya yellow-bellied quicker than misplaced bladders..
Hoist ya to curbs.. poisinin nerves..this battle 'lead' to ur death..
Trace the murder weapon back to a 'pencil' instead of the tech..
This verse is the answer to your thread question "whos wack now"(heres the thread.)
Just because your 'pussy queeves' doesnt mean your the 'cats meow'..

Hollow Bones


*Bats never be out in the Day



Concepts worries about my ammo cos my flow stops his kind..
aim my bullets at his forehead..thats a load off his mind..
I flip this site,with plans and beat you and this tourney..
it's like you got sympathy for dicks the way you feel for em..

*Wait-Unacceptable...Style Switch*

Rip this herb,You aint heard?,that Hollow sick with words?,I bruise kids back..
nuclear just give up man like 'midget charities' donating to Shaq!..
Write to slay wit my violent ways, staple ur lips and kill this silent gay
Beat you in ‘darkness’ with a ‘BAT’ so you won’t ever see light of day..*
Serve ill contortions,Get scorched wit torches, spit magazines at u and distort ur ‘Sources’ ..
In a hurry to die? Like farmers who lift ponies, u better hold ur horses..
I got this locked.If i wanted to murder you i'd start reversin the time..
Then piss in ya mom while shes pregnant, and drown u in ya birth canal!
Spew ya birthplace,The ravenous bars eat ya face turnin ya body to dead weight..
It won't be no more beef between us,I'll bury the hatchett,RIGHT IN YA FUCKIN CHEST PLATE!

vote plz..

nice battle yah got right here

yah mad me wanna keep readind yah verse good job


yah both had some nice lines and punches and nice flow

but my vote goes to nuclear becuz his punches where betta

but dont get me wrong both verses where nice so holla

can yah vote in my battle just llook at the name

my vote nuclear



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aight yo this was a ill battle. I love seeing punches that make me laugh and this battle had planty from both sides.
punches-tie
wordplay-n.c.
creativity-h.b.
flow-tie
ima gives this one to nuclear cuz his punches hit just a lil bit harder.
holla
~1~

One of the newest battles I've seen where I liked both the battlers verses

Nuclear

"Toss boxing gloves in a hampster ball and you still couldnt roll with the punches.."

"Hoist ya to curbs.. poisinin nerves..this battle 'lead' to ur death..
Trace the murder weapon back to a 'pencil' instead of the tech.."

Hollow

"nuclear just give up man like 'midget charities' donating to Shaq!.."

"Serve ill contortions,Get scorched wit torches, spit magazines at u and distort ur ‘Sources’ .."

I also have to give this one to Nuclear though

You both had everything great except 1 area
Nuclear had the flow and Hollow didn't
Great battle, I enjoyed reading it

Peace

thanx for the votes. this was gettin slept on like whoa. 3-0 me.. i guess this was a pretty close battle. props hollow.

up!

thank fucking lord... its about damn time there got to be better people on this board..

damn, lol i dont feel like going for a full run down, so instead ill make it simple..

metaphors
Nuclear=7, had some ill ones, but needed a few more
hollow=7.8, came with a few iller ones.. not as playd

punchs
Nuclear=7/8 had alright.. needed some more follow throughs, and directed ones..
Hollow=8 str8 punchs, i thought..

rhyme scheme= tied..

vocab=tied

vote= Hollow bones

one

are you a vet on here?

¿

I wouldnt really label myself as a vet, for the mere fact that in rap theres no such thing, your alwasy trying to elevate to a higher level, meaning becoming the greatest rapper isnt possible.. Theres always some one trying to gain more skill, as well as myself..

although i have been here for around a year

one

well i'm one of the kids from bboys.. and i'm a newb there..

3-1 me.

The Score is Still the Same. Shouldn't there be Votes.

this was a pretty good battle...
nuclear had the begginin by far...
his punches was aight and wordplay was aight too..

hollow had betta wordplay by far...
multies goes to hollow too....
good battle to the both, but hollow clearly took this...
vote=h.bones....
-$-

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Don't Hate. Just Shut your Damn Mouth.

..EveryOne Here Has Had a Different Name. Dont Lie..

LIke the name, like the rhimes, one vote for NuClearConcepts. hollow bones is a bit hollow and shallow you need to get more deep