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Old 07-23-02, 06:13 PM   #1
synickle
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"grownin in the fast pace"

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i saw alot in tha span of jus a short ass life,
watched three homeboyz and in my arms they died,
bullets filled wit heat put they lifes for a price,
but it wasn't high enough cuz now ya life is mine,
filled wit anger and pain so my lyrics unwind,
live'n this hell on earth so i ain't got no time,
to be dealin wit tha drama unfoldin everyday,
gotta keep my mind straight if i wanna get paid,
it's tha only way i know, how i was brought up,
gangsta mentality's got me not givin a fuk,
walkin around on my streets like we was outta luck,
no turn'n tha events of tha killed and deceased,
so i got my tattoo's on my back and arms,
keep it tru to my luved one's wit a rest in peace,
but now i'm livin solo, ain't go no problems,
got ghetto ass ho's callin think i'ma solve 'em,
but in my city aint no luv, we from tha 360,
that be tha area code and we don't luv them ho's,
now lemme tell ya'll bout this game i got,
been rappin all my life and yeah my cd'z hot,
it jus hit ya block tha other day,
and when it comes to freestyle,
it's anybody's day, so what ya say,
u wanna flow for verse, cuz guarnteed in this cuz,
i ain't gotta reherse my verses hit ya dome,
like a tek to ya neck, sportin tha vest,
so i went for ya head layin in a puddle of dead,
didn't wanna take ya life,strife'lin ass ho's
gettin fuked every night,
so much disease and corruption's got me goin insane,
but kraze be tha name stackin for tha fame,
bangin wit my click jus that k.c.c.
from tha city n.y.c to tha boogie down bx
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Old 07-23-02, 07:33 PM   #2
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that was all right but it would have been better if you didnt drop so many filler lines
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Old 07-24-02, 01:22 PM   #3
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MORE FEEDBACC PPLSSSS good lookn out doggy
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Old 07-24-02, 02:05 PM   #4
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an aiight spit.. ..flow went on and off and i wasn't really feelin tha content, it wasn't anythin i haven't seen before.. ..use better wordin and try to be more creative, it keeps tha people readin/listenin interested.. ..keep spittin


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