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eyvon 0 0%
HAZARD 5 100.00%
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Old 10-12-04, 08:12 AM   #1
HAZARD
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From: great britain
HAZARD vs eyvon

IP: E22B 305C

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-12-04 at 08:42 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.
 
Old 10-12-04, 08:13 AM   #2
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Eyvon has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 08:13 AM.
 
Old 10-12-04, 08:15 AM   #3
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HAZARD has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-04 08:15 AM.
 
Old 10-12-04, 08:18 AM   #4
KiTTie
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yo bitch-ass just buggin me cause u wanna lose another battle/ 1
ill git u on ground lock, like a pussy when in strattle/ 2
u think u dope, but u r yet 2 win, so just watch yo fuckin mouth/ 3
u arfraid 2 confront me in fronta everyone, so u take another route/ 4
u cant battle so y the fuck u try? so put ur keyboard up 2 rest/
y the fuckl u battlin 4 u can never beat the best!
 
Old 10-12-04, 08:24 AM   #5
HAZARD
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Ya Scriptz Get Shrunk, So You'll Neva Make "Big Time"
A Candle With No Wick, see Your Verses Will Neva Shine
Shoot Ya Down From The Sky, Fat Bitch, You'll Fall Quick
"Punches" Land Repeatedly, Like Drunk Teen Alcoholics
You'll Get Demolished, Ma Stats Must Have Ya Fooled
Like Second Hand Shoes, Dissapointed This Kid Wasn't New

Blah, Quick Free.....

Aight Lets See What Ya Got
 
Old 10-12-04, 05:31 PM   #6
KiTTie
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it sucked, but w/e (mine)

i had about 3 minutes 2 spit this. if i woulda had @ least 10min, i coulda spit summin a lil more complex, but OH WELL...
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Old 10-13-04, 05:35 AM   #7
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Old 10-13-04, 05:37 AM   #8
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Voted For: Eyvon

eyvon won diz battl he killed u hazard wit da punches

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Old 10-17-04, 09:04 AM   #9
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Voted For: HAZARD

hazard got diz his verse wuz moe creative n da puns he used were was moe effective diz eyvon peep need 2 elevate cuz it wuz self glorying in sum linez n da vocab wuz weak
 
Old 01-02-05, 04:26 PM   #10
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Voted For: HAZARD

yo bitch-ass just buggin me cause u wanna lose another battle/ 1
ill git u on ground lock, like a pussy when in strattle/ 2
u think u dope, but u r yet 2 win, so just watch yo fuckin mouth/ 3
u arfraid 2 confront me in fronta everyone, so u take another route/ 4
u cant battle so y the fuck u try? so put ur keyboard up 2 rest/
y the fuckl u battlin 4 u can never beat the best!
^^^^^^^^^^^um. The punches were "eh". The flow was kinda chopped up in some places. Wasnt an good verse, but you tried.



Ya Scriptz Get Shrunk, So You'll Neva Make "Big Time"
A Candle With No Wick, see Your Verses Will Neva Shine
Shoot Ya Down From The Sky, Fat Bitch, You'll Fall Quick
"Punches" Land Repeatedly, Like Drunk Teen Alcoholics
You'll Get Demolished, Ma Stats Must Have Ya Fooled
Like Second Hand Shoes, Dissapointed This Kid Wasn't New
^^^^^^^^^^^^ UM, alright good verse, had some punches, no personals. Decent wordplays. Good flow. Keep on dropping fam.





overall= This is one-side battle. Lady gangsta, you had an weak verse, punches werent that good. Flow was chopped up. You had some personals but the punches with it werent that good. I have to go with Hazard, cause of harder punches and good flow, decent wordplay.
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Old 01-02-05, 04:32 PM   #11
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Voted For: HAZARD

hmmmmmmm i think hazard got this his punches were more on point in this battle and the vocabulary was that little bit better...

lines that won you the battle...

Shoot Ya Down From The Sky, Fat Bitch, You'll Fall Quick
"Punches" Land Repeatedly, Like Drunk Teen Alcoholics
Ya Scriptz Get Shrunk, So You'll Neva Make "Big Time"
A Candle With No Wick, see Your Verses Will Neva Shine

overally the battle was good but you need to spend more time on writing these to get the bigger advantage on your opponents... good battle no hate

return the favour links in the sig... pz.
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Old 01-12-05, 05:31 PM   #12
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Voted For: HAZARD

haahahahhaahhahaha Ya Scriptz Get Shrunk, So You'll Neva Make "Big Time"
A Candle With No Wick, see Your Verses Will Neva Shine
Shoot Ya Down From The Sky, Fat Bitch, You'll Fall Quick
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol good opena hazard vote has 2 go 2 you no doubt here.......good folw good punches good use of vocab....goodstructure and flow............ Kitte get the fuk outta this site...ur a fukin newb elevate kat ur fukin wack...........WACK WACK WACK WACK...... rest my case vote goes 2 hazard he will erk ur apunk asssss.......anywayz holla bak.............. wit a vote in my battles .......below...........return the favour.........aigght...........
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Old 01-19-05, 02:43 PM   #13
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Old 01-24-05, 06:56 PM   #14
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Voted For: HAZARD

Aii Ima Vote On This Lil Quickie Battle yall Got Here donT forget To RTF when ppl vote in your battles or Later On When you Want someone to vote in your battle They gonna say ....oh hell nawl I aint votin In Yo Battle You neva RTF'z so dont be rude and Remember RTF

Aii My Explanation

Openers
Aii If I compare
Ya Scriptz Get Shrunk, So You'll Neva Make "Big Time"
A Candle With No Wick, see Your Verses Will Neva Shine
To This
yo bitch-ass just buggin me cause u wanna lose another battle/ 1
ill git u on ground lock, like a pussy when in strattle/ 2
The Ima Have to say That HAZARD came wit The strongest Opener
So Opener v/HZRD

Best Bar Punch
u think u dope, but u r yet 2 win, so just watch yo fuckin mouth/ 3
u arfraid 2 confront me in fronta everyone, so u take another route/ 4
To This
Shoot Ya Down From The Sky, Fat Bitch, You'll Fall Quick
"Punches" Land Repeatedly, Like Drunk Teen Alcoholics
Also HZRD took Because he came with The hardest Body Punchez LOL "Body Punchez"

Aii enders:
You'll Get Demolished, Ma Stats Must Have Ya Fooled
Like Second Hand Shoes, Dissapointed This Kid Wasn't New
To This
u cant battle so y the fuck u try? so put ur keyboard up 2 rest/
y the fuckl u battlin 4 u can never beat the best!
Aii HZRD took the ending Because evyon Last Line was Kinda played So .......MY overall Vote is

Hazard

DONT FORGET TO RTF IN MY SIG PLEASE I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT REALLY DO THAT AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE EXPLAIN YOUR VOTE SO IT WONT GET dQeD SO PLZ RTF
tHANX
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